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Published: 2011-11-14 13:24:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 5091; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Neeeee *stretchs*
¡
[It cannot be...]
[This demon...]
[has possessed the souls of the elderly]
[If the daemon dies their spirits will be dragged with him .There must be a way to save them!

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Es obvio que Sesshomaru no piensa lo mismo ú_u Para la siguiente semana más ^^
It is obvious that Sesshomaru doesn't think so ú_u Next week more ^^

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Comments: 36

yellowis4happy [2011-11-24 20:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, the suspense!

Sorry I've been so lax in commenting on these, I've been really busy lately and haven't had a lot of time to be reading. ): But I'm on break now, so I had time to go through what you've posted so far, and I really like what you've done. This page is especially nice. I like all the heavy blacks. :]

Your translations for this chapter so far have been almost perfect - on page 83, it should read "His eyes also bleed!!" instead of "Their eyes also bleed," because she is talking about Sesshoumaru and not more than one person, and "I have lost this much blood?!" would be better than "So much blood I lost?!"

On page 84, "Because I cannot bleed" would fit Kikyou's personality more than "Because I can't bleed," since she tends to speak more formally, and "can't" feels more casual. "Rare" should be "strange" or "odd," and "Like if someone had died here. Short time ago" would be better as "As if someone died here... a short time ago."

On this page, it should be "there must be a way to save them!" instead of just "must be a way to save them!" Otherwise your translation is spot on.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

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FanasY In reply to yellowis4happy [2011-11-25 12:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much darling! I though review the translation with you and ~borreguitamich later but this is better! I'm glad that now the translation is correct
And I'm glad you like the pages

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yellowis4happy In reply to FanasY [2011-11-26 07:49:39 +0000 UTC]

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YakuKikyo [2011-11-21 21:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Ow.... I so can't wait to see what's gonna happen next !

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FanasY In reply to YakuKikyo [2011-11-22 14:47:37 +0000 UTC]

i hope to update this week

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WolfLegend [2011-11-20 20:23:47 +0000 UTC]

._. poor old men ...i think sesshomaru its gonna kill the demons enyway D:

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FanasY In reply to WolfLegend [2011-11-21 13:20:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading ^^

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Soul1991 [2011-11-16 11:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Amazin ^.^

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FanasY In reply to Soul1991 [2011-11-16 18:18:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you Soul

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Narakulover24 [2011-11-15 11:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Please update....

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FanasY In reply to Narakulover24 [2011-11-15 16:42:43 +0000 UTC]

In a week there'll be more pages n_n

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Narakulover24 In reply to FanasY [2011-11-16 00:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Okay..

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Narakulover24 [2011-11-15 06:16:25 +0000 UTC]

Interesting...

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FanasY In reply to Narakulover24 [2011-11-15 16:41:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your support

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Narakulover24 In reply to FanasY [2011-11-16 00:37:06 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!!

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Lorenya-chan [2011-11-15 03:42:33 +0000 UTC]

siguiente semana? no me dejes asii D: sesshomaru tiene cara de mm matare no matare... y kiero saber que araaaaaa D:

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FanasY In reply to Lorenya-chan [2011-11-15 16:41:26 +0000 UTC]

es que tengo que publicar unos trabajos antes, pero me esforzaré para dibujar más de una pagina para la semana que viene Muchas gracias por leer esta historia^^

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Lorenya-chan In reply to FanasY [2011-11-15 21:58:15 +0000 UTC]

no puedo dejar de leerlo por que es geniaaal y aparte la intriga que nos dejas xD y claro no te sientas presionada que dentro de lo que cabe la historia es algo para ti, algo que quieres ver y leer ,no solo dejarlo en imaginacion (:

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FanasY In reply to Lorenya-chan [2011-11-16 11:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Mcuahs gracias, me alegra crear intriga jejeje^^ Lo haré a mi ritmo, para que todos los lectores puedan disfrutar como yo de la historia

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Cati-Art [2011-11-15 01:07:22 +0000 UTC]

It seems that Kikyou will have to persuade Sesshoumaru. I can't wait for the next page!

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Theultimateclub In reply to Cati-Art [2011-11-15 17:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Yea that going be hard for Kikyo

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FanasY In reply to Cati-Art [2011-11-15 16:40:34 +0000 UTC]

I hope you like the next pages dear Cati!!

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red-winged-angel [2011-11-14 18:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh noes! D:

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FanasY In reply to red-winged-angel [2011-11-15 16:38:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading my story

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red-winged-angel In reply to FanasY [2011-11-15 21:24:55 +0000 UTC]

Welcome! ^^

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Theultimateclub [2011-11-14 16:43:14 +0000 UTC]

wow

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Theultimateclub [2011-11-14 16:42:41 +0000 UTC]

Write great job 2 in one day

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FanasY In reply to Theultimateclub [2011-11-15 16:38:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading

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Theultimateclub In reply to FanasY [2011-11-15 17:37:22 +0000 UTC]

You r so welcome

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Angelsaivar [2011-11-14 16:24:42 +0000 UTC]

¡Está absolutamente geniaaaaal! Y Kikyou te sale tan hermosa! DX Quiero leer maaaaas

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FanasY In reply to Angelsaivar [2011-11-15 16:37:56 +0000 UTC]

muchas gracias ;o; Me encanta que te guste Me anima un monton a seguir ^^ Arigatou!!

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nekolover94 [2011-11-14 15:42:04 +0000 UTC]

D8

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FanasY In reply to nekolover94 [2011-11-15 16:35:21 +0000 UTC]

XDDthanks for reading ^^

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TenshiNoFuu [2011-11-14 13:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Seems like it's going to be tough for her to save them

Really nice manga page again

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FanasY In reply to TenshiNoFuu [2011-11-15 16:35:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you again lovely Fuu

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TenshiNoFuu In reply to FanasY [2011-11-16 13:38:07 +0000 UTC]

Always welcome dear, your works deserve so much praise

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