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veritasBtold [2012-01-20 02:03:20 +0000 UTC]

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This piece definitely captures one's attention, however at first glance I thought of a scorpion, even though the title depicts it as a phoenix.
THis could have easily been remedied by elongating the "sections" of the neck. However because of the style the artist has used it could be that to further the point of pointillism the in using a circles as a primary object, however it that be the case, I believe it should have been pushed even further and used only circles.
The colors are vibrant and eye catching, however the colors look a bit muddled in some sections. Obvious use of shading is a nice touch and the varying outline brings a appealing contrast to the image.
An interesting piece. The next step for you would to put meaning into your art. Is this just a pretty bird-esk painting or was there something behind it. Your art should take people on a journey, help to to feel an emotion, or realize a passion.
I encourage you to "put heart into art" and give the viewer something to take away with them. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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