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Farblade — Seared Heart
Published: 2009-04-25 23:57:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 317; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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She's already gone.CHOKE
Your soul, it sings requiem to me
FADE OUT
Though you sleep in the dark, blinds drawn
BLEED
Pray to the dreamer, your father, your lover.
FALL
Sit on the sidewalk as passersby throw nickels in your lap.
ASUNDER
Be helpless as she cries every tear that God counts.
FAILURE
Despondency is the last possession you own.
MIDNIGHT
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Comments: 8
Duly noted. i know exactly how you feel.
i was in the same position. but things always happen for a reason. you will be better for it. i know, my ex girlfriend is friggin crazy. and i know i will be a better person in the long run. you will to.
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just so you know, mac, you are the one who's ignorant and childish. Who was the one who cheated more then 3 times in 3 years? You know as well as I do that we're both at fault. I left for a week unknown just as how you camped a week at amtgard unknown. So stop being so bitter about things that happened between us and move on. I considered you as a mistake. And for that I disgrace you.
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anytime you need to talk just holla!
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I like it a lot. ^^
I adore all the words you used, especially "Requiem".
I'm afraid you have all my poetry beaten. ^^
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Eh, I've read a few of your pieces dear, and your poetry isn't bad at all. Most, if not all, of my poetry is mood-based, and I can't write it without my emotions. Its a tool of mine. Don't worry about your quality of poetry, just be concerned that you are proud to have it written and in a state you are pleased with.
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