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Description Entry for  Eb Hunting Riderless Competition


Name: Lucien

Id: E-056

Age:  Immortal

Gender: Stallion

Story:


Lucien has returned to Iron Horse Stables a week prior to the competition; He arrived with Maledict, his blind companion. Maledict had been injured and needed urgent care, and since Lucien was always welcome at IHS, he was accepted immediately. About a week into their stay, IHS was invited to go into a riderless Hunting competition. What horse could be better than an immortal nomadic wanderer that hunts for himself daily?

Lucien had no objections; one gets bored easily when you have lived over 700 years.

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Lucien stalked through the brush of the forest, his hooves eerily silent on the leafy bed. He smelled something on the wind-- a pungent, musky smell. Boar. He crept closer, willing his old bones not to crack and his joints not to creak. Dawn was just peaking over the mountains; a mist was filling the forest. As he crept into a small clearing surrounded by red-brown trees, he saw his prey. A massive boar was rooting at the stump of a tree for mushrooms. Suddenly, the wind turned and the beast winded him. It wheeled on its heels, snout low as Lucien came into his view.

The two circled each other for what seemed like ages. With a loud squeal and flying hooves, the large boar tore towards Lucien. Its mouth gaped open, revealing his own savage teeth. Its eyes were wild and hungry for blood. The stallion reared up, calculating the distance.

20 feet.

10 feet.

5!

Down came Lucien's hooves on the skull of the beast. A loud crack emanated from thee head and the boar screamed. Lucien's maw bore down on the boar's neck, long fangs sinking in to flesh, wrenching the throat savagely. Another crack of bone and all was done. Dropping his kill, Lucien lifted his eyes to the heavens, thanking the Highlords for allowing him a victory before he ripped into his meal, being sure to save some for Maledict. 


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GO LUCI GO

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Comments: 11

Vexlovely [2014-02-28 19:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Final Score 


Propper From: 5/5

shading 5/5 

bg 4/5

prey 5/5

horse 5/5 

image all togeather 4/5 

Story: 15/25

Prey Bonus: 5

Total Score: 48

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Fargonon In reply to Vexlovely [2014-03-01 04:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Woooo!

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Enharmonia [2014-02-16 20:51:36 +0000 UTC]

OMG GO BALDY


I love this guy. Seriously.

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horsecrossing14 [2014-02-16 01:29:42 +0000 UTC]

amazing!!!!! love the story

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Vexlovely [2014-02-16 01:18:25 +0000 UTC]

this is good and love the story that goes with it :3 

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Crodelec [2014-02-16 01:08:51 +0000 UTC]

-flips table- well there goes my chances of winning !! This is amazing  !!!! 

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Fargonon In reply to Crodelec [2014-02-16 01:10:18 +0000 UTC]

SHHH YOU HAVE JUST AS MUCH ChANCE AS ME

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Crodelec In reply to Fargonon [2014-02-16 01:11:33 +0000 UTC]

ish okay I probably wont enter since I am working on a Last of Us Fanart 

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ELGURITCH [2014-02-16 01:05:52 +0000 UTC]

*SOBS.* THIS IS TOO PERFECT. 


How da heck can you do trees that perfect. ;3;

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Fargonon In reply to ELGURITCH [2014-02-16 01:08:35 +0000 UTC]

NO THEYRE UGLY

/hides behind ugly trees)

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ELGURITCH In reply to Fargonon [2014-02-16 01:09:28 +0000 UTC]

THEY ARE BETTER THEN MY POOPY TREES. ACCEPT THAT THEY'RE BEAUTIFUL

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