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Published: 2005-12-03 05:20:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1310; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 153
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Erik's writing something. XDokay people, I am NO GOOD AT POETRY!
If you know how to do a sonnet, some other form of poetry, for the love of God, PLEASE DONATE A POEM ABOUT ASTRA TO ME!
If your entry is good enough, I'll use it in the comic and give you credit. But, it has to be about astra and it has to be sappy and it has to be admiring her or something, written from the point of ciew of Erik. If someone can do this for me within a couple of days, I would be eternally grateful, otherwise, I get to scrap the idea of a poem and go with something else.
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.... in your comic, erik has neat cursive hand writing, "clumsy childish hand"
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ah... eh... I just go with what would have been taught to children back then, which is very proper cursive, almost elaborate...so I try to be as elaborate as possible.
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but he didn't go to a normal school, he learned every thing in a fair he traveled with, and i bet he didn't write too much during those years
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:: shrugs:: it also goes with the image. I'm sure he would have taught himself how to write so he could send those notes to the managers.
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sorry, i meant to type after "hand writing" [in the book, gaston leroux wrote "clumsy childish hand"]
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and just because it bothers me so much, it's "sapphires". by reading this, I'm guessing that my assumption that your eyes and her eyes are the same color. ^^ hmmmm *continues writing, almost done now*
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Heeeeeeeey, could I do it? I write really good ballads!!! ^^ Astra you say? hmmm I think I could help! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? *points to gallery* got lotsa poetry, I'm sure I could write something!
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um, okay. ^^ go after it!
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*squees as she begins typing*
So she's...yur alter-ego in the form of a doll, half-elf, lives in texas, goes to hogwarts (and is a member of gryffindor)...anything else I should know for the poem? like anything in particular that she likes to do? walking in the rain? flowers when she wakes up? >.> I could imagine some stuff, but it's yur chra, so I'd like to get some stuff right. ^^
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my eyes and her eyes are the same, yes, but they are blue-gray.
he only knows so much about her, so guessing what she does is pretty well in the air. Basically, she's a bit of a tomboy, likes doing boyish things, but what she does there so far is be playful with Ed and Al, and sit and quietly read. Unfortunately, as a doll, she can't sing, but when she's out of her body like the other three, she does and rather well, though it's not opera quality. So basically, whatever you write, you're taking a guess from what you've seen of her and what you know of me. That's as good as he's going to get, so you're doing well. I'm sorry about all this.
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oh, no prob! I've sent you a kind of sketchy bit in a note. if you like it, then use it, if not, I'll rewrite. ^^
and thanks for the info! (can't wait to read more!!! I love your comics! they make me smile!)
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That's what my comics are there for, to entertain. ^^ Glad you enjoy the stories I write.
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^^ no prob! Can';t remember now how I came by them, but man, I'm soooooo glad I did! (I also got a few of the books to read for my Phantom of the Opera report from your comic when Erik was reading them early in the story. ^^)
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lol he only readds what I've got and what I've got are the original story and The Phantom of Manhattan. I also have Terry Pratchet's schizoid vision of the phantom wandering around the streets on crack called "Maskerade"
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O.O oh god, I totally read that. lol or at least enough to be able to tell the basic storyline that it's a phantom story. I read the phantom of manhattan (for a few chapters, it wasn';t the Erik I knew and loved, so I put it down *shuddeers* not musical genius.... not very good...)
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I liked it. >.> a lot. >.>;; and Maskerade is a Discworld story, so it has some basis in THAT world.
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hmmmmmm
I'll have to read it again (preferrably when I get more time than just two weeks cus I'm a bit of a slow reader).
both of them.
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