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Published: 2012-08-02 17:16:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3384; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 0
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Commission for , a bust of her OC Vaxir.I'm -very- pleased with how this turned out, if I get to say so myself C: Loved doing the gums and the cheek. Or.. What's left of her cheek! xD
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Are you aware someone is trying to rip this piece off?
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Yes, I've seen it and I've reported it. And sent a notification to the person in question. Can't say I'm super happy about it x3
But thank you for notifying me :3
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I've left my love in the notes to you QoQ I adore this so much.
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I'm really happy you liked the outcome C:
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Thank you ^^ I don't get to do gore-ey stuff too often!
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Sure, I'll be a bit more precise, I just thought that pointing it out would make it more apparent and you would see it yourself. Hope I'll be able to explain it in an understandable way, as English isn't my first language.
The orientation of the head dictates that the teeth should be seen cascading away from the viewer, whereas you have drawn them almost completely from the side. Google a picture of a skull and you'll probably see what I mean. Also, the exposed row of teeth should probably be pointing more upwards, but that's a bit more minor.
Google image search also helps to figure out the neck anatomy. The main issue I'm having with the neck is that the sternocleidomastoid muscles (Those are the long ones that runs next to the adams apple) is not following the rotation of her head. And so we have a frontal view neck with a 3/4 view head glued on. I guess the main lesson here would be to always use suitable reference when drawing stuff you haven't drawn before.
And please, don't take this as a "Oh this guy just wants to hurt my feelings, I'll ignore his opinion", I genuinely want to help you because you show promise, which is alot more than I can say for 95% of the artists on this site. I spent a good 15 minutes typing this out and I'd hate to see it thrown away
Best of luck!
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Nay, I wouldn't have asked you to be more precise if I was going to ignore your advise x3 And I'm glad you took the time aswell :3 I tend to focus more on textures rather than perfect anatomy, haha. But it's something I'll keep in mind for future projects, you learn new things all the time!
Once again, thank you for taking the time! C:
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Oh wow, really? 
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Holy hell that is creepy as fuck but awesome
Reminds me NOT to sneak around any areas that Bane exist in on any char, ever. xD
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Haha, I know x3 She does keep a helm on most of the time tho'!
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Oddly that doesn't make me feel better or safer 
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Her helmet only comes off when she's gonna eat somebody
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She looks ehm, lets ehm say that I do not want her to suddenly jump out of my closet late at night, while home alone...
*shudders*
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I know what you mean x3 I imagine her being capable of very gruesome things.
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Exactly the kind of response I was hoping for x3
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Not bad, you're getting there. One tip would be to use less soft brushes, as it seriously flattens the image. The anatomy of the neck is a bit wonky, and the perspective of the exposed teeth is off. Hope this helps!
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Exposed teeth have never been my fortΓ© (or teeth in general xD), and definitely something I need to practise on executing correctly. But when it comes to constructive critique, I'd appreciate it if you'd be a bit more precise 
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