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Fresh-Minty [2019-06-03 13:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I found your art thanks to
I wanted to say that it's a cute picture you drew there. I don't know who those characters are and what's the relationship between them, but it looks adorable, especially Thalia' face. Allyz looks nice, but more 'I just woke up, don't talk to me before I have my first coffee' or maybe "I am here only because you asked me to come", I don't really know how to describe it actually.
You'll probably say I'm statting the obvious, but there is something wrong with their hands, especially Allyz. I know those are hard to draw (I struggle with it constantly), here the fingers have different size and it just doesn't fit, the last two fingers in particular, (speaking of Allyz' hands here), it's as if they were glued together. The middle finger shouldn't be that long and the forefinger could be smaller and thiner too. Just my opinion here, but perhaps it'd have worked better if you had put the right hand over the left one, so that there wouldn't have been so much space between the different fingers. Also, just a question here, but why not shading the hands?
Regarding Thalia, nothing much to say except that her outfit is cool and, once again, that I like the expression you gave her. There might be something strange with her hand as well, like her fingers could be longer and thinner too, but it'll less visible. The 'issue' (and it's not a big deal) is her jacket that is not in the right 'position', so to say. In my opinion, it should follow the over all direction Thalia is looking towards, that is leftwards (for us) instead of to the right. If I had to be picky, I'd say the shadowing is wrong as we can't see where the light is coming from (is it from up, behind, front? I'd say up if I was to guess according to Allyz' clothes, but then, why aren't Thalia's more shaded?)
That said the effect you made with the 'bubble/circles' to picture the snow is nice and the border at the bottom and up of the drawing makes me think of a sort of holiday/christmas card.

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KawaiiSans2 [2019-05-22 12:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Its snow problem. I'll help you. XD

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20031999 [2019-05-22 00:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome.

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