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Published: 2004-03-30 11:49:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 21
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Description If I compare my love for you,
To the waters of the seas,
They would be but a raindrop,
Beside what you mean to me...
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Comments: 11

justb [2004-04-03 16:52:09 +0000 UTC]

this is very good, it reminds me of the Emily Dickenson quote that says "If one were to ponder which was greater, the sky or your mind, I would say your mind, because the sky it would contain, with room for you beside." Not sure if that's word for word, but it kinda goes like that. Boundless and depth of feeling are nice motifs when worded correctly, and these seem to be just that.

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LittleShelley [2004-04-01 16:17:08 +0000 UTC]

I miss my ex...


Very nice! Short and stright to the point but doing a nice job while doing so. I like!

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feardorcha In reply to LittleShelley [2004-04-01 20:42:54 +0000 UTC]

...but at least your aims improving....

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LittleShelley In reply to feardorcha [2004-04-02 11:54:26 +0000 UTC]

it is? lol, its not

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feardorcha In reply to LittleShelley [2004-04-02 22:26:58 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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OlorinIcanus [2004-03-31 02:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Short and sweet. Very nice and vivid.

Auguste

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straysilver [2004-03-30 22:42:04 +0000 UTC]

oh my wow

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feardorcha In reply to straysilver [2004-03-31 11:15:05 +0000 UTC]

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rabyt-05 [2004-03-30 18:14:57 +0000 UTC]

hmmm i dont get it?

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rabyt-05 In reply to rabyt-05 [2004-03-31 18:19:50 +0000 UTC]

ooo now i get it sry...

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feardorcha In reply to rabyt-05 [2004-03-30 18:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Dont get what? Its an expression of love

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