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Published: 2008-03-11 01:24:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 239; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 1
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Description Alone in her room,
she sits looking out the window.
Lonely, left to die.
She does nothing but draw and dream.
Dream of a hero to come and save her.
A lonely little girl looks out the window.
Frightened and scared.
No one loves her,
no one see's her.
She's tried to leave,
but something holds her back.
It was a promise she once said.
The poor lonely little girl,...
she doesn't know she's dead.
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Comments: 6

Day-Dreamer07 [2008-04-11 02:00:41 +0000 UTC]

A universal feeling, but clearly with your unique mark.

Nice poetry.

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fearkid1 In reply to Day-Dreamer07 [2008-04-11 02:07:28 +0000 UTC]

yup, it's for a book i'm writing. i like how the peom turned out.

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Day-Dreamer07 In reply to fearkid1 [2008-04-11 02:14:49 +0000 UTC]

g'luck with your book.

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fearkid1 In reply to Day-Dreamer07 [2008-04-11 02:20:09 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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Eliyora [2008-03-11 05:36:56 +0000 UTC]

That's a very sad poem.

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fearkid1 In reply to Eliyora [2008-03-11 13:25:48 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i'm like that.....i have more peoms too, in my gallery.

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