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Fearverse — Anthem to unknown pleasures
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Published: 2018-05-06 16:49:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 579; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
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So glacial, yet so hot,
Those sensations flow,
Through their veins,
through their brains
And trough their eyes

Thoughts in their mind
Rapidly passing by,
Killing their reason,
Crowning the unreason

Clouding their judgment,
They seem so happy,
They feel so warm,
Deluding themselves that
They are not alone.

Is it worth it then?
That blind foolishness?
May I wake that sleepy need
Of lips never tasted?
Shall I share that claustrophobic
air with a twin soul?
Could I heat my soul
To a burning match?

Will I ever feel blind,
happy and lost at the same time?
Will your heart, ever be mine?

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Comments: 5

phnks [2018-05-07 00:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful word play here... love also the transition, at the beginning its vague enough that the reader doesn't really know where this is heading, but hits a concrete conclusion at the end, leaving the reader feeling, well, empty...

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Fearverse In reply to phnks [2018-05-10 21:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the feedback!
It means a lot

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phnks In reply to Fearverse [2018-05-11 02:31:29 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I enjoy what I read, I post what I think, going to be positive stuff since I enjoyed it
I find it also just gives a writer good motivation to keep writing that way. Plus I don't think I'm qualified to fully critique a poem lol

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Fearverse In reply to phnks [2018-05-20 22:44:52 +0000 UTC]

On telegram I told what that was about!


Anyway who is qualified to fully critique a poem?  

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phnks In reply to Fearverse [2018-05-21 21:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Good point, sadly some people really think they are very very 'qualified' to critique poetry. To me its a hobby, but to some when its a career that encompasses everything about them... they can be rather uh, harsh to put it mildly. I understand their perspective, doesn't mean I necessarily agree that they should act the way they do though.

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