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Published: 2004-06-01 22:32:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 788; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 129
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Description He's slipped away to Insanity
unaware to the World's eye.
He's forgotten values like humanity,
but who cares?
His World is going to die.

Now he chuckles at all the lives lost,
when someone decides to try,
instead they pay the Ultimate Cost.
But who cares?
His World is going to die.

Secretly, his mind his carving
a sadness to make his soul cry.
His subjects are rebelling and starving.
But who cares?
His World is going to die.

Is he really so far beyond Hoping?
Would he just let himself pass on by?
What about the sadness with which he is coping?
Is his World really going to die?
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Comments: 6

hot-summer [2008-09-28 09:34:22 +0000 UTC]

awsome.
im iraqi )8 and hoping our world wont really die ;.;

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fly-0008 [2008-06-28 19:20:52 +0000 UTC]

This is very beautiful
so much truth to it..

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wings-03 [2007-07-05 07:45:49 +0000 UTC]

*tear* I loved it. Very beautiful and very emotional.

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thegreatescape [2006-11-29 07:27:41 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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cygon [2005-11-07 16:19:13 +0000 UTC]

wow! Amazing job, stirred up emotions, especially with your choice of photo to go along with the poem. Exceptional Job
you get from me.

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tailo3000 [2004-10-23 06:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Good Job, i like the poem

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