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Published: 2011-11-29 11:47:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 2162; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 38
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Description As soon as Rioichi had seen the shadow on the moon, he ran. He flew over the rooftops, feeling the stare of the demon drilling into the back of his head. His heart pounded and his head pulsed. He had to get back home. He had to warn Koizumi and his children. Or- or- he put the breaks on that train of thought and ran even faster than before. He flung the door of his house open and continued to lock and ram as many pieces of furniture as he could against the Skillfully crafted and painted door.

He collapse don the ground and Koizumi rushed out of the kitchen and to his side. At her feet was their 5 year old son, Tsunehiro, who immediately scurried over to see what all the commotion was about. Rioichi gave his child a brief smile before turning to his wife.

'It's coming! I saw it's--- the moon shadow--- the yellow flames... they-' Rioichi gasped to catch his breath and began to sob. Koizumi's eyes widened.

'But he'll-' She gasped, and wrapped her arms around her son.

'Otosan, Okasan, what's wrong?' Tsunehiro climbed into his father's lap and hugged him. Rioichi nuzzled his son, and lifted him up. Tsunehiro laughed, and Rioichi told him to play a game with him.

'Now, you must be very quiet, not a word! Okasan and I will make loud scary noises, but you must not move! If you move or make a sound , you lose the game. Now, here' Rioichi scramble don the floor before levering up a trapdoor. 'You must go down there, follow the tunnel until you reach the end. As soon as there is no sound, you have won the game, and come out the end of the tunnel, okay?' Rioichi did his best not to cry, and smiled as warmly as he possibly could. Tsunehiro laughed and smiled back. He hugged his parents and began to climb down the ladder.
'I'm gonna win! Definitely! You can't scare me!'
Rioichi closed the trapdoor and turned to the window.

He could see the beast soaring through the sky, he was hypnotized by it's glowing eyes. Koizumi pulled the curtains shut and the pair backed away to the farthest corner of the room. Koizumi wrapped her arms around him and uttered a prayer, Rioichi nuzzled and kissed his wife, always keeping one eye locked on the door. Then he heard it-

A horrible cracking and screeching. A bashing and a thumping and a thudding. Koizumi froze in his arms and Rioichi held her even tighter.

The split of the door then a shadow, a screech and a scream.
Blood.


Gwham, that took a bit to write.

okay! this is my side of an art trade with
She wanted me to draw Rioichi and Koizumi in a dramatic scene.

So why not the scene just before Clockwerk- you know....

Rioichi and Clockwerk (c) Sucker Punch Productions
Koizumi (c) Killy Killer Killy
Tsunehiro (c) me
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Comments: 39

Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-02 15:53:18 +0000 UTC]

have you seen the new pic of Rioichi?

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-03 04:03:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I've seen Sanzaru's pics of him, though I personally prefer his original design.

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-03 04:04:02 +0000 UTC]

he looks older hmmm i wounder if you might actually get to see what Connor looks like

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-03 05:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Maybe, I hope so *I hope we can see kiddy sly as well X3*

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-03 05:36:49 +0000 UTC]

so tell me what ou think

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-03 05:40:25 +0000 UTC]

... I just did? Uhh, well, I gues, I prefer RIoichi's original design *seems more sttractive and younger* But the new one is interewsting, the brown/red/orange fur colour is good as it indicates that he's a different kind of raccoon due to his heritage, and teh confucious style speaking should be amusing X3

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-03 05:41:34 +0000 UTC]

no i mean the changes to Nick

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-03 05:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Well, he's your character, As long as you make him interesting and lovable in some way *give him some interesting qualities* he should be fine ^w^

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-03 05:45:16 +0000 UTC]

only thing is hes not crazy hes clear minded

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-03 05:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah well, even if he was related to johnny, that wouldn't make him crazy. Having a sane character is generally pretty easy.

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-03 05:49:44 +0000 UTC]

back in the days of BlackHole he only focused on the target he had no consent for his team mates or anyone else


btw BlackHole is the group he was a member of before the leader was killed and i wanted to ask you if i could have it where johnny killed thier leader

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-03 12:37:13 +0000 UTC]

... What exactly did Johny have against 'blackhole', he's simply a serial killer, he has no real target. Sorry, I'm just curious

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-03 15:57:53 +0000 UTC]

no the leader tried to kill johnny he thought he would be a threat to his gang

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-04 01:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Understandable, But Johny really wasn't causing havoc for too long as he terrorized a town/village/area for a bit until the insane asylum managed to catch him and locked him up, where he's been sitting for about a decade. And anyway, he was only based in Africa, is this organization based in Africa?

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-04 01:37:19 +0000 UTC]

and Whitaker knew about johnny and that a few of Blackholes members were security guards at the asylum and couldnt risk losing anymore of them so he went to take care of johnny once and for all and ended up getting eaten

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2011-12-04 03:55:22 +0000 UTC]

... Okay, hang on, is thi sbased AFTER Johnny attacked Sly? Because prior to that, Johnny was safe under lock and key before they sent his psychologist in and Johnny attacked *as they had nneglected to put his muzzle on because he had been behaving for the last couple months* When they tried to save the psychologist, Johnny escaped, killing all of the guards, ending with a new recruit who was faster than th erest but got caught in a dead end. Then of course SLy came along *still working on why * and nearly got sufficiantly mauled... *s trying to think of how your thingy fits in* uh, so did your guy come in after news got out of Johnny's escape?

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-04 04:03:12 +0000 UTC]

but a few of it's members were eaten alive before sly got there then weeks later Whitaker went to get revenge o nly to be eaten

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-04 03:56:20 +0000 UTC]

yes the asylum hired the BlackHole organization as their main security forces

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-04 01:29:44 +0000 UTC]

all over the world

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-12-03 05:26:17 +0000 UTC]

and i re did nick his new name is Nick Slater hes still a hyena but hes not related to Johnny and hes a Merc for hire pulling off assassinations all over the world

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Dreadmon [2011-12-01 20:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Dreadmon [2011-12-02 08:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Vixcoon [2011-11-30 03:39:52 +0000 UTC]

AAAH I screamed at the end XDDDDDD; my sister was like "WTF o3O"

I looooove thiiiiis 8'D

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Vixcoon [2011-11-30 03:54:06 +0000 UTC]

For serious? You- I- I made you- SCREAM?


Thankyou!!!

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Vixcoon In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-11-30 03:56:27 +0000 UTC]

I was hyper enough, so I was just like 'omgomgomg..AAAAH NOOO!' XDD; <3333

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Vixcoon [2011-11-30 04:11:14 +0000 UTC]

XDD Ahh! The comment box, it's typing on the right side
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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Vixcoon In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-11-30 04:28:32 +0000 UTC]

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT IIIIIIIIS THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADNESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Vixcoon [2011-11-30 04:37:13 +0000 UTC]

IT IS BACK TO NORMAL NOW!! 8D

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SnookumsGal [2011-11-29 23:12:51 +0000 UTC]

The game... I lost it ;A;

But lovely picture brohan<3

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Fel-Fisk In reply to SnookumsGal [2011-11-30 00:32:14 +0000 UTC]



X3 thankyou~

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BlitsRainer [2011-11-29 17:27:45 +0000 UTC]

look's like a real shadow of the past.

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Fel-Fisk In reply to BlitsRainer [2011-11-29 21:36:55 +0000 UTC]

That's the idea X3

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BlitsRainer In reply to Fel-Fisk [2011-11-29 21:52:00 +0000 UTC]

nice.

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MessedUpEssy [2011-11-29 17:23:50 +0000 UTC]

fffffffffff I soddin' love it tantan!!
so didn't expect you to finish it soo soon 8D and wow, I love how you drew them in this one and the little story was adorable and so wonderful! and Tsunehiro seems to be soo frikkin cute though if my canculations are right, which they usually aren't but sue me, so does they actually have a daughter which is suzanne cooper later on 8D mother of henriette one eye cooper, mother of tenessee kid cooper etc! but I like him never the less... maybe I shall stealz him? I will work on my part furiously from now on!!! >8D

btw, if I remember correct you're from australia and is sort of good with japanese right...? because then maybe ya can help be translating a god damn name I have been searching to meaning of for AGES.

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Fel-Fisk In reply to MessedUpEssy [2011-11-29 21:36:03 +0000 UTC]

YAY! i was hoping you'd like it, I wa skinda worried it *both the story and the picture* were a tad rough-and-ready, but I'ts good to hear it turned out well ^w^ I wasn't expecting to finish so son either, I just got a burst of inspiration~


Hmm, a Japanese family probably wouldn't call a child Suzanne XDD I was thinking maybe Tsunehiro goes against Shogun law and manages to escape feudal Japan, secretly marrying a British lady, and after their child's *Suzanne maybe?* child is Henriette~ Does that work? XDD You can use Tsunehiro if you like~ *I actually named him after my Japanese teacher from primary school~*

I should probably draw him at some point~

I know very basic Japanese, So I MIGHT be able to help *if this is that Dokuthei name though...* though I was using google translate, and doku apparently means poison~

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Deathnightwolf [2011-11-29 14:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Deathnightwolf [2011-11-29 21:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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yogeshsalvi21 [2011-11-29 11:48:12 +0000 UTC]

loved the style of work.....

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Fel-Fisk In reply to yogeshsalvi21 [2011-11-29 11:52:48 +0000 UTC]

;U; thank you~<3

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