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Published: 2007-03-01 18:23:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 4664; Favourites: 134; Downloads: 75
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I pulled myself back together after the Photoshop failure (loosing everything here but the lineart) and gave it a second try. It's way different from the first version however. Really...blue?All my stuff is turning gay on me, haha, like my art wants me to be in the closet
I'm not trying to say that gay people draw gay like this, I just think I'm starting to draw like a gay man, LOL. SO!!!! Moving on..I need your help again~ tell me what to fix up in this so I can make it into a shiny poster and sell...umm..somewhere. Thanks so much!!
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this is lovely xDD but nothing as gay as =pinkx2 and hes a guy too xDDDD i love him xDD
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*jaws drop to the ground*
OH GOOD GOLLY
this is beautiful
I absolutely love it (:
I love rainbow ^^
AHAHAHA
this is the best I have seen!! :B
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@__@ Would SO want as a shiney poster!!
( D: Aww, Don't knock it!! I love the blue!! ;.; <3 )
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hehe, this is just friken awsome, love the colour and pose ^_^
signed HTT
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The coloration does look saccharine, but this is still looks very nice.
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I see the lineart as a gothic lolita standing in front of a dreadful old castle. So yeah, I'd pretty much paint it in black and silver hues. But I doubt you would want to do that. xP
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wow i love the colors they really stand out i like bright colors so it fits my taste...it really REALLY rEaLy GOOD!! its so amazing how good u r
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Man I keep coming back to this one *favs* i just love it
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Your art is so good, it's discouraging! I chose this one but really? 5000 page views? i think you'll hit 50000 no problem!
Do you have professional training?
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Haha thanks so much! I don't know how people on DA can get 2 million in less than a year, it's crazy! But no I don't have any training, just watch lots of anime ^^ thanks for stopping by!
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Those clothes really...bring out her finer details. Mmm, now I really DO wanna taste the rainbow. 
Alright, see...here's the thing. It's pretty much about personal tastes with this pic. There are a few things I can point out, but they're not absolute.
Here are some things I would like to see...
1. less clothes... 
The shades are too bright for me. Just personal taste. Hmm, you don't have to change the colors, just use darker shades.
Perhaps the shading should be a little more 3-dimensional [link]
...What I mean to say is that she looks a little flat with that castle in the back.
Hmm, she's really bent over @.@ (not that its a bad thing) peeping tom is having a heyday behind all those glass windows... XD It would help with perspective if she looked a little more 3-d ish, but maybe she just needs to be a little more under the horizon?
Also, I think the castle should be a bit further back...check this out...something like this...I guess, but with your own style. [link]
I would really like a poster with perspective like this...I guess it 'expands' the room. *shrugs* what do you think?
Now, here are some ideas for the eyes. (Some of your work that really caught mine)[link]
or [link]
Things me like:
You did a great job with the body and head of the girl. Nice lines.
The bubbly clouds are awesome, keep them.
I also like the brick/crystalline walls in the distance, but some of the towers look to be leaning a bit.
I'm not sure that the rigidity of the walls matches the fluff and playful outfit of the girl. Hmm... Maybe you should put some spirals, and stars on the castle. Maybe star windows or something. Spiral towers and such.
Wait! If you make this a night scene, you can make the shapes on her outfit glow in the dark! Plus, if it's a night scene, you can light up the castle and stuff. Really bring out the rainbow. It would make any gay man proud! XD
The mosaic sky is creative, but i'm not sure it matches. Perhaps she should try on some fishnet stockings.
Lots to say. Hope this helps. Just throwing some ideas out there. It's a real eye-catcher though. Good Luck with your poster!
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*o* Ahaha nothign wrong with drawing EXTREMELY girly things.
I think it looks wonderful! 
Hahah! She reminds me of cotton candy for some reason X3 But I REALLY love how you colored her. 
I think the style really fits the lineart. It doesn't seem like it would look as sweet with bright colors.
And her lips XD omg <3 They remind me of Miwako from Paradice Kiss!
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Wow~
The colors are so sparkly. I'm in a trace
The way you colored the piece gives off an enchanting effect, I really like it
I think Blue turned out nice in the end X3
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wooooooooo. pretty colors!!!
i don't think theres anything that you need to change on this to sell it
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love it! Great colors. :] i love rainbow thiiingggsss. ahah. and i'm straight. so yay for rainbows.
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Maybe more clouds would look nice
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idunno, maybe thange the BG tone a bit. The character isnt standing out like she should
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it does look pretty gay but ur a female this stuff comes natural to u. it looks aright i dont think you need anymore changes to it
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