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photo: femketje ©NikonD70
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my sweet Timmi
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-vision i give it 5 stars cause it's SO clear & a very cute tuxedo kitten looking very comfortable
-originality only half points because alot of people go for shots like this it's just really hard to catch them w/ the mouth open clearly & from a decent angle
-technique half points for the same reason as for originality alot of people do it but it's just about timing
-impact PERFECT it drew me right in however I do think it could be improved slightly by messing with the light cause it's a bit to dark I can't see the eyes (i know they are closed but still)
all in all it also looks like you had the same angle issue as I did last weekend w/ capturing my shot "Luke Yawn" you know the focas & timing was perfect but the angle makes the one fang look missing until the image is expanded but PERSONALLY I think that'll get the images more visits therefore more comments & faves so IDK if it's really a flaw but you know it's something e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
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well i made this shot like 3 months ago already XD
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ahh well it does look good I just am not great at choosing the exact number I think it catagory deserves but I think 4/5 total is good
btw- here is the shot i mentioned of mine [link] he is a neighbor cat who thinks he belongs at mom's he was sunbathing on the sideway so I love the lighting BUT in yours I love that it's a more comfy place for the kitty to nap ^_^ I'm thinking if I ever submit a print it'll be on that piece but if I ever request critique it'll prolly be on an easier shot or a drawing cause these are things that are pretty simple to redo taking the advice
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adorable kitty!!
and cute capture xD
I don't think he's yawning, though .. it's more like a threat .. look at those teeth! ahh xD
haha
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