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Ferelwing — The rabbit has come
Published: 2010-02-04 03:36:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2058; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 21
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Description The little white rabbit has come
It's time for tea
I wonder where the hatter went?
Was that meant for me?
Perhaps that was just a hint

Alice went through the glass
And I fell on my bum
I can't find that last pass
I guess I'm really done

The Cheshire stole the scepter
And I was on the run..
He put it in the rector
All in good fun

Tweedle dee and Tweedle dum
Are always in the way
Went and drank all the rum
Still twas a rather interesting day

If I find the Cheshire can I go back home?
Perhaps I'll take the thunder
And continue where I roam
With a portal full of wonder
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Comments: 71

Ferelwing In reply to ??? [2010-03-22 18:19:03 +0000 UTC]

So very true!

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IRISHWSDM [2010-02-16 02:27:50 +0000 UTC]

I love the whimsy in the ryhme excellent pace and words!!

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Ferelwing In reply to IRISHWSDM [2010-02-16 06:09:35 +0000 UTC]

I had WAY too much fun with this one!

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IRISHWSDM In reply to Ferelwing [2010-02-17 02:20:31 +0000 UTC]

good thats what its about sometimes!!

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LostSoul330 [2010-02-15 22:27:34 +0000 UTC]

I agree we all become well a bit mad... hehehehe... lol

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Ferelwing In reply to LostSoul330 [2010-02-16 06:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Yep, we really do!

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LostSoul330 In reply to Ferelwing [2010-02-16 22:18:14 +0000 UTC]

lol

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motherearth01 [2010-02-15 21:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Very well written poem.

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Ferelwing In reply to motherearth01 [2010-02-16 06:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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motherearth01 In reply to Ferelwing [2010-02-16 22:56:04 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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AshDixon18 [2010-02-15 20:55:59 +0000 UTC]

I really like it... it's great just like all the others you do!!! ^^

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Ferelwing In reply to AshDixon18 [2010-02-16 06:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks!

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AshDixon18 In reply to Ferelwing [2010-02-16 14:23:33 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome. I appreciate your work!!!^^

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chavon13 [2010-02-15 20:12:40 +0000 UTC]

I love it!!

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Ferelwing In reply to chavon13 [2010-02-16 06:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hon!

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brutalbich [2010-02-15 18:47:14 +0000 UTC]

love it hon!! I know I'm a bit mad more often than not

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Ferelwing In reply to brutalbich [2010-02-16 06:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hon! Yeah me too!

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brutalbich In reply to Ferelwing [2010-02-17 00:42:28 +0000 UTC]

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kiwi-damnation [2010-02-12 01:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha Nice.

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Ferelwing In reply to kiwi-damnation [2010-02-15 18:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks Sis!

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kiwi-damnation In reply to Ferelwing [2010-02-18 22:13:04 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure beautiful

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rustymermaid [2010-02-09 17:33:55 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome.I love it

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Ferelwing In reply to rustymermaid [2010-02-15 18:32:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Barbara!

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AnksMusicForTheSoul [2010-02-08 17:15:57 +0000 UTC]

This is soooo much fun to read!

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Ferelwing In reply to AnksMusicForTheSoul [2010-02-15 18:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you!

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Ferelwing [2010-02-08 02:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Me too!

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candysparksrocks [2010-02-07 16:37:05 +0000 UTC]

i think if i was in the land of wonder i would totally stay there with the mad hatter... and have lovely drunken parties!

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Ferelwing In reply to candysparksrocks [2010-02-15 18:31:47 +0000 UTC]

Me too!

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Lorilae1 [2010-02-05 05:33:11 +0000 UTC]

I know I am! Nicely done.

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Ferelwing In reply to Lorilae1 [2010-02-05 08:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hon!

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Lorilae1 In reply to Ferelwing [2010-02-05 14:50:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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gnomethedroll [2010-02-05 03:07:10 +0000 UTC]

It's cute. I really liked it even though a couple of the rhymes and rhythms are kinda awkward. I suppose it just adds to the madness and nonsense though!

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Ferelwing In reply to gnomethedroll [2010-02-05 08:22:45 +0000 UTC]

I considered cleaning it up but the way it was felt more "real"

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LostChronicle [2010-02-04 23:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Very entertaining! What would this world be without us being insane at times eh? It's what gives some of us a fair portion of inspiration

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Ferelwing In reply to LostChronicle [2010-02-05 08:22:23 +0000 UTC]

So very true!

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Valedhelven [2010-02-04 16:56:52 +0000 UTC]

Makes me REALLY antsy for the new movie to come out!!

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Ferelwing In reply to Valedhelven [2010-02-04 17:12:43 +0000 UTC]

You and me both Ellen! I wish it'd hurry already!

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Behana [2010-02-04 16:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Hehe love the subject matter and the style of the poem fits it perfectly.

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Ferelwing In reply to Behana [2010-02-04 17:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hon. I've just been feeling a little odd and decided to express it.

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Behana In reply to Ferelwing [2010-03-16 18:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Hehe that's great! Sometimes the odd ideas are the best!

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Ferelwing In reply to Behana [2010-04-26 22:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Agreed!

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Canankk [2010-02-04 08:29:34 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful

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Ferelwing In reply to Canankk [2010-02-04 17:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Canan!

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SuliannH [2010-02-04 04:55:29 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed this

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Ferelwing In reply to SuliannH [2010-02-04 17:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart!

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boot-cheese-3000 [2010-02-04 04:50:46 +0000 UTC]

love your re-interpretation of a classic. are you looking forward to the movie coming out? i heard it's gonna be in 3D.

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Ferelwing In reply to boot-cheese-3000 [2010-02-04 17:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hon! Oh hell yeah! I can't wait!

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boot-cheese-3000 In reply to Ferelwing [2010-02-05 00:18:12 +0000 UTC]

yeah me either. i might wanna see that in the theaters and get HELLA FADED for that chumpie.

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Ferelwing In reply to boot-cheese-3000 [2010-07-08 21:27:11 +0000 UTC]

I loved it, what did you think?

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boot-cheese-3000 In reply to Ferelwing [2010-07-09 21:35:25 +0000 UTC]

haven't seen it yet but hope to soon when it comes out on dvd.

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