Comments: 4
muddpuddle [2004-10-10 15:35:03 +0000 UTC]
Interesting rhythm. It, doesn't seem to quite match up though, the begining and the end. Something not quite right, but i cant think of it. Excellent tho...
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undefinability [2004-09-20 08:01:46 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, dig the description.
And I'm not sure whether it's the amount of poetic shit I've read lately, or that I haven't read your work for sometime, but I really have nothing to say about this.
I do, but I'm too focused on something else to even attempt to critique. Nevertheless, I am compelled to do something, and it might be something you hate, but it has to be done.
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sarahtomic [2004-09-19 23:14:17 +0000 UTC]
I think I'd like it more if I were better read and read better. *Sigh* the troubles of the non-English major. I wish I were more pretentious, I really do.
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festivemanb In reply to sarahtomic [2004-09-20 04:29:21 +0000 UTC]
Dude, you have so much opportuntiy to be pretentious. Just not the particular refined English major pretentiousness that I can deal with. You can be an art pretentiousness, a music pretentiousness,,,, many many things. Me? I'm stuck with words.
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