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They get to the Hot Springs, Naruto's worried about Sakura and Sakura's... being very quiet.

Sorry for being terribly late And sorry in advance for however long it takes me to get the next page up. See, I head to the airport in about 4 hours and I'm not sure exactly how much I'll get done this next month or whether I'll have a scanner (or a computer... I'm bringing it to see if I can get it fixed). That said, one of my focuses for the next month is to work on art, so I hope to actually finish this doujinshi this month.

Art wise: First time (and possibly last) that I drew this entirely from scratch on the computer. I think I did okay, though I redrew some parts sooo many times... Dx From this point on though, expect the doujinshi to gain a new look. Now tha I've got the basic idea, I'll be sitching to doing the lineart in pen and also using screentones and such. At least, I *hope* to. I won't know for sure whether I like the look until I try, ne? XP But yeah, I said at the beginning that this was a practice doujinshi, and it still is xD;;

Naruto (c) Kishimoto
Tribute (c) Fey
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Comments: 24

honorpaige [2013-07-07 23:35:46 +0000 UTC]

her hair looks really pretty that way

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FeyPhantom In reply to honorpaige [2013-09-27 01:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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bossrhino [2008-09-09 04:56:01 +0000 UTC]

how much longer do i have to wait?

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FeyPhantom In reply to bossrhino [2008-09-09 21:15:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm not really sure. I'm trying to organize my screentones before I use them (it's far easier for me that way) but I have very little time at the moment since all my classes have high amounts of work already due, plus a lot of other issues which have come up in the past couple weeks. Please be patient for a while longer. Once I start putting the screentones on the pages, I should be updating daily or bi-daily since that is literally all there is left to do on all of the remaining pages.

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bossrhino In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-09-10 05:32:52 +0000 UTC]

alright take your time then. thanks for replyinig to my message

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FeyPhantom In reply to bossrhino [2008-09-10 05:40:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Thanks for your patience.

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Highspeed0516 [2008-08-08 07:33:30 +0000 UTC]

I wish this is how the real manga would have went, and Sakura looks very sexy at the springs. Nice choices with the perspectives too.

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FeyPhantom In reply to Highspeed0516 [2008-08-12 18:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Hee, but if the manga went like this we'd miss out on the Iruka/Naruto talk which was win in my opinion. And I love how Naruto found out 8D I guess I'm happy with this as just a fan doujin. Anyways, thanks! Unfortunately this is about the extent of Sakura fanservice this doujin will get And I find I have to remind myself to mix up the perspectives a bit, so I'm glad they're not going unnoticed

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Highspeed0516 In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-08-20 06:48:22 +0000 UTC]

True... but I still wanted her to say SOMETHING!

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FeyPhantom In reply to Highspeed0516 [2008-08-20 11:58:09 +0000 UTC]

Agreed. It would have been nice if he had at least put a little NaruSaku into it. But I feel like it's coming... just in a while.

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Celious [2008-07-31 16:36:52 +0000 UTC]

I really like this story !! I made one too!But this one is really awesome ^^

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FeyPhantom In reply to Celious [2008-08-02 15:56:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'll have to check yours out too when I have the time ^^

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Celious In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-08-02 16:07:14 +0000 UTC]

No prob ^^ Take your time

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goodchaos [2008-07-30 04:20:52 +0000 UTC]

YAY!! Next page Next page Next page!! >_> but no rush, of course..

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FeyPhantom In reply to goodchaos [2008-08-02 15:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Hee, thank you! Hopefully I'll have a computer working soon enough but until then I'm working on the linearts so hopefully I'll be able to give consecutive updates the next time I post ^^

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MiTcHiE-0w0 [2008-07-29 17:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Yay NEW PAGE!!!!!!!!!! Now next page next page XD

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FeyPhantom In reply to MiTcHiE-0w0 [2008-08-02 15:49:32 +0000 UTC]

lol Dunno when I'll get it up, but I'll continue working on pages off the computer till I can work with them on, so hopefully there will be no more breaks after the next time I start posting. Thanks for the enthusiasm! ^^

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MiTcHiE-0w0 In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-08-02 17:07:33 +0000 UTC]

XD You're welcome

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narusaku-fan654 [2008-07-29 15:34:07 +0000 UTC]

yay the new page is out!!! looks like it's starting to get a little more interesting... lol i can't wait to see what happends next

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FeyPhantom In reply to narusaku-fan654 [2008-08-02 15:43:40 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully it'll be interesting XP Dunno when I'll get the new page out though. I've finished the lineart for it but I don't have the ability to put it on the computer yet

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narusaku-fan654 In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-08-02 15:51:34 +0000 UTC]

DANG!!! oh well...i guess i'll be patient...

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sakura10199 [2008-07-29 08:18:04 +0000 UTC]

I really like this so keep up the good work!

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FeyPhantom In reply to sakura10199 [2008-07-29 08:29:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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sakura10199 In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-07-29 08:57:03 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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