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fgg22 — Suzie 2.0

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Published: 2017-08-14 05:53:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 19499; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 53
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Description I realize not all of you liked Suzie's face as much as I would have wished. This is me trying to improve the model, any further suggestions/criticism?
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Comments: 15

DannyboyO1 [2017-08-14 21:15:08 +0000 UTC]

Is better. I didn't have much trouble in the first place.

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qw3qwe [2017-08-14 11:50:46 +0000 UTC]

Nah, original was considerably better. New one is deep in uncanny valley, because sprinkling an inheritedly stylised design with realistic details doesn't work. Definitely should simplify the eyelashes and shading in her next iteration.
Also, you may notice that these changes have completely changed the percieved character of the model- try to imagine that trollface drawing gif with new Susie and you'll find that new, more adult nd feminine look doesn't work with it nearly as well.
Hair is a lot better, though. 

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CaveGrue [2017-08-14 09:12:20 +0000 UTC]

I liked the original just fine, though the new hair is nice.  
The expressionless stare remains just as creepy as ever, of course.  Yay uncanny valley.

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FamouslyFused [2017-08-14 07:25:55 +0000 UTC]

So cute! I hope you make more conjoined pairs! New characters or old.

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excilion [2017-08-14 06:51:53 +0000 UTC]

I don't know.. it looks like I'm the only one who prefers the 1.0

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Ra-Oul In reply to excilion [2017-08-14 12:38:09 +0000 UTC]

I don't think so. Honestly, I think he should make some pictures attempts with the 2.0 character and see which one is the best.

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DRagon-ArtWorks [2017-08-14 06:31:07 +0000 UTC]

I'd say she looks more detailed/refined/developed.  I never had a problem with the old version, but it's good to see nostril detail and what have you.
I think the slightly larger lips work very well, seems fuller but not super big. 
I thought the eyes worked fine with how you had them originally, the new lashes will probably be a nice addition to the overall detail.  but,  I also think it depends on the eye style, for example: you could have just made her upper eyelid lash area twice as thick and extended eyelash tip more out the side. 
I don't know if that made any sense- She kind of looks right for the style of eye that is not all eyelashy, - like the thicker almost Egyptian eye type of style.  
I also like how the stumps seem to be 'in' more, looks better, says I.

overall, I'd say she definitely looks improved, nice update!

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fgg22 In reply to DRagon-ArtWorks [2017-08-14 06:44:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I totally know what you mean about the eyelashes, will think of that.

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EZEikian [2017-08-14 05:56:53 +0000 UTC]

looks much more professional! nicely done

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love4arms In reply to EZEikian [2017-08-14 06:35:01 +0000 UTC]

I love the face changes and the hair. (I'm struggling with the same sort of thing now as I update Violet)  You may want to sweep some of the eyelashes back along the eyelid line, the sort of shape you had before, as right now it looks a bit like an eyelash explosion.  

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TheLovelyVocal [2017-08-14 05:54:17 +0000 UTC]

You made her even cuter!

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fgg22 In reply to TheLovelyVocal [2017-08-14 06:03:01 +0000 UTC]

so, a plump lips, fake eyelashes, and a nose job xD, basically... that will do it right?  

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TheLovelyVocal In reply to fgg22 [2017-08-14 06:05:12 +0000 UTC]

:3 I treat it more as an evolving art thing. Like "Oh her nose changed" but in-character, she's like "Nah, it was always like that"

^^ Unless she canonically had plastic surgery done.

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fgg22 In reply to TheLovelyVocal [2017-08-14 06:08:47 +0000 UTC]

haha, no I'm just kidding of course. It's just a more detailed, nicer remodeled nose, unless nose surgery involves adding nostrils in her world xD

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TheLovelyVocal In reply to fgg22 [2017-08-14 06:10:19 +0000 UTC]

=w= lol right

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