Comments: 41
mdhiaid [2013-11-25 01:28:24 +0000 UTC]
I would have shit my pants twice if I were one of the sages.
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sushipanda411 [2013-10-30 05:28:09 +0000 UTC]
AH! WHITE COMPLETELY RAN PAST N AND WENT STRAIGHT FOR ALDER! AH! AFTER ALL THAT STUFF HE WAS GOING THROUGH AND IT WAS ALL BEAUTIFUL AND THEN BAM! THIS IS SO PERFECT AND TRAGIC AT THE SAME TIME! WHYYY!
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sushipanda411 In reply to sushipanda411 [2013-10-30 05:48:49 +0000 UTC]
also omg N being so concerned for white is the cutest ever :3 <3
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FieryFafar In reply to kgirlland [2013-09-21 09:56:26 +0000 UTC]
omgo ogmogmg i love songs like this this is beatufil! ;w;
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Nyghttyger [2013-09-15 19:51:32 +0000 UTC]
AH MY GOD YOU ARE AMAZING FAFAR GIMME THE NEXT CHAPPIE NOW!!!!
or I will die of withdrawal
PLOT TWIST? How can you twist the AMAZING EPICNESS that is the end of B/W? HOW!?
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FieryFafar In reply to Nyghttyger [2013-09-21 09:57:10 +0000 UTC]
ehehhehehehe gosh wow your comment made me smile eheheh >w<
next chappie is up go go go bb deposit yourself back n chase that chappie
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Nyghttyger In reply to FieryFafar [2013-09-22 05:41:03 +0000 UTC]
I MADE FAFAR SMILE! MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!
Oh, wait. I haven't read that chappie yet. nvm/shot BUT THEN CLIFFHANGERS!
...
COME HERE CHAPTER I WANT TO READ YOU! poor chapter/reshotwaitwhat
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FieryFafar In reply to pokediginut [2013-09-21 09:58:39 +0000 UTC]
ehehehe yea but it was fun writing him a bit cruel tho /w\
ffff ikr. poor alder. when i knew about his pokemon dead from sickness idk it just makes me feel sory for the man hes thinking of the lil kids
white falling down n N panic is always fave /w\
ehehehehhe ooo u do? 0w0 sassy elesa is sass she is not taking any of the sages shit aw ye
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pokediginut In reply to FieryFafar [2013-09-21 17:05:09 +0000 UTC]
no what I mean is how is it ironic that even though he lost his Pokemon, he wants to save te relationship between people and Pokemon?
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Shireyaki [2013-09-15 16:58:25 +0000 UTC]
NAWWWW
dat otp feels.
oh my
first N is like 'lol nope ur going down old champ. u no deserve pokemon'
alder is like 'no -crys- bad boy!'
and then there's white
and she#s like
'DONT U DAAREE DOING DAT N BIATCH'
but she's not showing it. neither she shows the 'OH MY THERE'S N I GOTTA GREET HIM'-feeling
and N is all 'oh my white oooh~ Owo'
and then. he's
so
worried
that was so adorable
i couldnt help but to make a loud awwwww-noise
N. y u so adorable *w*
nyahaha cherry is so adorable, too c: helps and does goooood stuff hehe
ha. alder. your around 30? OLD GUY FOR EVERYONE UNDER 30.
deal with it ;w; thats your fate.
and
oh
my
I CANT WAIT
FOR THE NEXT CAPTER
I WANNA READ IT
BUT THEN ITS OVER SOON
I GOT SO MANY FEELS RIGHT NOW BECAUSE I HEARD THE 'Ns farewell' soundtrack from the game
DAT SONG IS SO SAD - makes me feel like the people who put that in there wanted the player to ship the characters so hard lol.
and oh my
I CANT WAIIIT<3
this was so awesome.
I'll quit my.. commentraging now ;w; my my my my my my
myyyyy <3
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FieryFafar In reply to Shireyaki [2013-09-21 10:00:13 +0000 UTC]
ffffffff ahahhahahaha so many emotions from N to alder to white oh my god DONT U DARE DOING DAT N BIATCH' AHAHHAHA
EEEEEE YOU GIVE ME HAPPYS FROM THE COMMENT EHEHHEHEHEH omg N's farewell song is really sad esp when theres a piano verse
shhh dont ever quit comment u are such a spark of kittens eeee
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rijiiahiru [2013-09-15 11:20:30 +0000 UTC]
oh man^^ things escalated quickly didn't they? lol^^
its amazing I had 5 different emotions while reading this
1) N and Alder = anger
2)N's reaction to White = happy/depressed
3)White's outrage towards N = glee/praiseworthy
4)Yell fest = depressed
5) White surrounded = slight fear
lol yep that's awesome
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FieryFafar In reply to rijiiahiru [2013-09-15 16:05:16 +0000 UTC]
i am happy u bring u these 5 emotions
reading these 5 emotions of yours make me happy ehehhehe awww thanks /w\
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rijiiahiru In reply to FieryFafar [2013-09-16 14:45:44 +0000 UTC]
your welcomes lol and really my emotions make you happy^^ yay I did something good^^ I think o.O
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PercyEspeon [2013-09-14 19:57:53 +0000 UTC]
1. N bby stop being a meanie, you are making Alder worse D:
2. White comes in, awww he loves her, ADMIT IT N, dANGIT FEELS
3. White's like 'pfftt he's my enemy yet I love him....ALDER!' making N all broken.
4. N....bby White mad at you, YELL FEST
5. Castle appears....and White, you clumsy
6. Awww N was about to go after her D: Why, feels?!
7. White, he did that cause he loves you yet is like conflicted....N STOP
8. Yay, Cherry Berry here to make things better
9. Oh noes, Sages, stupid sages, you all are gonna get beat up by the gym leaders! JANE MAD xD
I loves it More, dANGIT
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FieryFafar In reply to PercyEspeon [2013-09-15 16:04:52 +0000 UTC]
the words i can only see is N and love n now im giggling alone ehhehehehe
awwww thank u /w\
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Artist-Who-Draws [2013-09-14 04:25:51 +0000 UTC]
Alder? Early Thirties? PFFFF NO.
He.
Is.
Sixty.
What would strange plot twist: WHITE LOOSES. (like other fics I've read... ) It wouldn't be expected...
I really liked this chapter.
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FieryFafar In reply to Artist-Who-Draws [2013-09-15 16:04:16 +0000 UTC]
60 omg hahahahhaaha! i wanted to write him around late 30s or early 40s but fff im sparing the poor old champion.
ehehehehheehehhee oh i cant wait to write the plot twist ehehehehhe
eeee thanks darling/w\
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AwesomeAbsolGumiho15 [2013-09-14 01:46:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Oh oh ohohoh
N what. No i liked it when you were lovy dovey with white. here you...... oh what.
XD Alder: Technically i'm in my thirties..." XD no you are old. XD
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FieryFafar In reply to AwesomeAbsolGumiho15 [2013-09-14 04:30:33 +0000 UTC]
white showing no guilt in stating alder is an old man oh white =w=
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FallenFromInsanity [2013-09-14 01:27:13 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAaaaaaaaaAAAAAA
N GETTING MAD
WHITE GETTING MADDER
N GETTING WORRIED WHEN SHE ALMOST FALLS
WHITE GETTING CONFUSED WHEN SHE SEES HIS REACTION
GYM LEADERS GETTING MURDEROUS
IT'S EVERYTHING I'VE EVER WANTED AND MORE
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FieryFafar In reply to FallenFromInsanity [2013-09-14 04:27:18 +0000 UTC]
U
ARE
MAKING ME
MAD BLUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHH!
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mimininikiki [2013-09-13 22:20:56 +0000 UTC]
Holy. Freaking. Cow.
N and White seeing each other again. Emotions, lots of them, boat loads.
And the Cheren and White friendship time, yay!
And then the sages trying to stop White, but nope, THE GYM LEADERS ARE HERE TO KICK ASS!
Yeeee, it's all so exciting, and just what I needed after a long week of school
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FieryFafar In reply to mimininikiki [2013-09-14 04:27:07 +0000 UTC]
hehehehhe oh im so happy it relieves u from the school eeeeee /w\
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Shido-chan99 [2013-09-13 20:33:02 +0000 UTC]
N u didnt save her whAT IF SHE FELL
ok im crai this whole thing i just cant
n omg in the description i know those lyrics woman
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FieryFafar In reply to Shido-chan99 [2013-09-14 04:25:56 +0000 UTC]
if she fell he sad
but then plot gets messed up so she okay for now
i wriote tht without realizing i was sleepy omg
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Diva3121 [2013-09-13 20:10:58 +0000 UTC]
was the "It popped out of the ground like daisies" line a reference to Mulan? or am I just looking to much into it cuz I love Mulan too much
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FieryFafar In reply to Diva3121 [2013-09-14 04:25:09 +0000 UTC]
ding ding ding u got that wriiite =w=
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Pokespecshipper [2013-09-13 19:29:00 +0000 UTC]
HOLY SHIT THAT WAS EPIC.
THE GYM LEADER PERSONALITIES ARE AWESOME
AND THE CONFLICT IS COMPLETELY SUSPENSEFUL
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GuardianAngel9x [2013-09-13 19:28:53 +0000 UTC]
I like that you made N hyperventilate when he got pissed, I like to do that to him too XD
OH AND yOU MAKE THEM FIGHT
I swear if I uploaded all of the mess that I give them people couldn't tell if I otp'd them either
Great chapter dear, fan-taS-tic as always~
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FieryFafar In reply to GuardianAngel9x [2013-09-13 19:40:00 +0000 UTC]
omg tht is my new fav headcanon. N hyperventilates n have a mini panic attack when all stressed out yes
of coURSE I MADE THEM FIGHT THEYRE MY OTP THEY HAVE TO FIGHT
THE CRUELER THE BETTER
omg pls do upload the beauty of out otp so tht we can share our love for them thru fics n fanarts of them fighting n hating each other <3
ehehehehhe awww ashy u knw having your comments are always a blush /w\
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GuardianAngel9x In reply to FieryFafar [2013-09-13 19:45:32 +0000 UTC]
why cant i have onE permanent headcanon for a character that just lasts it literally changes everyday
CRUELER THE BETTER OK THAT SOUNDS GOOD
And I miigghht. If I find them
because
usually
they're doodles and when it comes to most doodles
i kinda throw
them awa y eheh
/w\ your comments just brighten my mood automatically like wow
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