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TorreyCool37 [2020-03-14 02:58:14 +0000 UTC]
How do I read the story?
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Fifteen1413 In reply to TorreyCool37 [2020-03-14 03:43:20 +0000 UTC]
It's a PDF.
Any modern browser on desktop or laptop can read it directly.
Adobe has a free PDF viewer you can read it with on your desktop after downloading if you'd prefer.
If you're on mobile, you can get one of the many free PDF readers avalable for both android and IOS, download it, and read it there.
It's a PDF. It's litterally designed to be the most readable possible format, every system in existance supports it.
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Fifteen1413 In reply to TorreyCool37 [2020-03-14 17:21:59 +0000 UTC]
Do you download it by hitting the big button that says download on it, which is the way you've downloaded everything else on this cite? Is that what you're asking me? If the big download button downloads things?
Yes. That's how you do it.
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CybeastID [2020-01-28 13:49:50 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhhh! Your stories are so good!
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Gali-Rosella [2020-01-26 00:36:35 +0000 UTC]
...Marie better get out of this okay. I'm attached, dammit.
And hey, I think you can manage three large moons around a planet if the first one is so close that the planet is tidelocked to it and the other two are in resonance.
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Fifteen1413 In reply to Gali-Rosella [2020-01-26 06:37:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you can totally have 3 large moons around a world - but you can't have 3 large moons all less than 50,000 km from the planet, which has to be the case if her tails were casually reaching them. The closeness was the issue, not the number. Them being that close would a) cause devastating tidal effects on the world itself, but more importantly b) those tidal forces would act on the other moons and cause insane perterbations. You need them to actually get into resonance, and they can't do that in such a tight orbital space. There's just no way to do it. Those moons would have crashed into each other in days at most.
I'm so glad you like Marie! This is a giantess story, about a sexy kitsune destroying a planet, and you care about the perspective character. That's good! I can't promise you she'll survive all the way to the end, but I can promise you she's not a throw-away character. She's going to be the perspective through-line for all of Kitsune Breakout, except for perhaps a few pieces done from the perspective of TB 017. She's going to do more reporting on TB 017, so she will see more of the action, so to speak - but she's an investigative reporter, too, and I'm going to leverage that to have her track down TB 017's story and show off her sexy destructive backstory that way. Backstory pieces will be presented as discoveries Marie makes, and stories that take place 'foward in time' from this current story will be either Marie witnessing them or from TB 017's perspective.
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Ottriman [2020-01-25 09:55:34 +0000 UTC]
When someone is so perfect they dominate a puny mortal without even doing anything to them directly you know they're a god.
Nice descriptions in the story in general, makes one really buy the scale of what's happening.
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LarxGTS [2020-01-25 09:21:33 +0000 UTC]
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Amazing story!!! I'm not sure what to say besides that i absolutely loved that and can't wait until it continues! I genuinely lack the words to describe it.. must have been drooling too long at the image you created in my head of the perfect goddess.
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Rounds89 [2020-01-24 19:56:04 +0000 UTC]
Man, talk about attention to detail. The destruction of the planet, the description of the giantess's beauty, and it's effects, how the mortal characters of this story react to her existence, the build-up to the reveal and much more. I really wish more people knew about your work. You'd make a great author, that's for sure.
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Fifteen1413 In reply to Rounds89 [2020-01-24 20:03:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your kind words! I hope as many people as would like the story find it!
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