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Fifteen1413 — Kitsune Breakout: Log 1, The First Encounter
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Published: 2020-01-24 18:21:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 19081; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 314
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This is the first story in my 2020 'one story every two weeks' project. I hope you all enjoy!A note on planetary naming:
I don't mean to confuse people. Star systems have star names. Planets *generaly* have the name of their star followed by a number. Moons of planets have a letter after the number. Earth would be Sol-3. Mars' moon phobos would be Sol-4A. This is pretty close to how star systems and exoplanets are labeled in the real world.
A note on scaling:
I know that major moons would not be within tail grabbing range of a planet with any reasonably sized kitsune tails. Hers are supposed to be quite large, but not that big. They would be roughly as long as she is tall. I am aware that having 3 moons of any real size that close to a planet would be catastrophicaly unstable. I'm an areonautics engineering student going into spaceflight. I broke the rules *on purpose*, for artistic reasons. I didn't just not know, I knew and decided the image was too good and purposefully ignored it.
A note on the 2020 project:
This story is 7000 words/13 pages in length. This is a lot to do every two weeks. This is an intro story to the Kitsune Breakout sequence of stories, and I wanted to push through the setup and also show a little bit of goddess action. Most stories in the project are going to be 1/3 this length. This is not the standard setter. I do want some stories this long - I plan to write one or two longer! But of the 25 total stories that are planned to come out as part of the 2020 project, most of them will be shorter. I just can't do 300 pages of story in a year while also writing other non-giantess stories and getting an engineering degree. I don't want you all to set your expectations too high.
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Do you download it by hitting the big button that says download on it, which is the way you've downloaded everything else on this cite? Is that what you're asking me? If the big download button downloads things?
Yes. That's how you do it.
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...Marie better get out of this okay. I'm attached, dammit.
And hey, I think you can manage three large moons around a planet if the first one is so close that the planet is tidelocked to it and the other two are in resonance.
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Oh, you can totally have 3 large moons around a world - but you can't have 3 large moons all less than 50,000 km from the planet, which has to be the case if her tails were casually reaching them. The closeness was the issue, not the number. Them being that close would a) cause devastating tidal effects on the world itself, but more importantly b) those tidal forces would act on the other moons and cause insane perterbations. You need them to actually get into resonance, and they can't do that in such a tight orbital space. There's just no way to do it. Those moons would have crashed into each other in days at most.
I'm so glad you like Marie! This is a giantess story, about a sexy kitsune destroying a planet, and you care about the perspective character. That's good! I can't promise you she'll survive all the way to the end, but I can promise you she's not a throw-away character. She's going to be the perspective through-line for all of Kitsune Breakout, except for perhaps a few pieces done from the perspective of TB 017. She's going to do more reporting on TB 017, so she will see more of the action, so to speak - but she's an investigative reporter, too, and I'm going to leverage that to have her track down TB 017's story and show off her sexy destructive backstory that way. Backstory pieces will be presented as discoveries Marie makes, and stories that take place 'foward in time' from this current story will be either Marie witnessing them or from TB 017's perspective.
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When someone is so perfect they dominate a puny mortal without even doing anything to them directly you know they're a god.
Nice descriptions in the story in general, makes one really buy the scale of what's happening.
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Wow, this piece was absolutely incredible! Your stories never fail to impress.
Your descriptions are just fantastic as always, and the level of detail you give to various subjects really makes things feel more fleshed out.
If this is just the introduction for this story series, i'm quite excited to see where you go with it!
Only bigger and better things, one can imagine
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Amazing story!!! I'm not sure what to say besides that i absolutely loved that and can't wait until it continues! I genuinely lack the words to describe it.. must have been drooling too long at the image you created in my head of the perfect goddess.
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Man, talk about attention to detail. The destruction of the planet, the description of the giantess's beauty, and it's effects, how the mortal characters of this story react to her existence, the build-up to the reveal and much more. I really wish more people knew about your work. You'd make a great author, that's for sure.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I hope as many people as would like the story find it!
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