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filigree-lace — valentines day resolution no.1
Published: 2011-02-16 10:48:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 3
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i've watched you screw aroundand screw up (your life)
and screw over (me, her, us, them) that girl that i loved
because her smile was like a lantern
in a world that's way too dark.
my chances are gone
down and down, spiralling into a drain that you created
to give me something to empty all my dreams into.
and you think i'm going to let you
do the same to someone else and suffocate another flame of hope
between your fingers?
keep dreaming, hun.
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Comments: 3
At the point of my view, you have two favourites and fourteen views on this piece. I love serendipity.
I love this piece. The parentheticals in particular stick out to me, in a good way. The message is also very powerful, and I can't recommend you change anything!
Great job!
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thank you <3 (and thank you for the fave!)
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Of course. Thank you.
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