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CanRay [2020-01-07 04:08:35 +0000 UTC]
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Chaosate [2011-03-09 06:06:51 +0000 UTC]
You make D&D obsolete.
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FionaCreates In reply to Chaosate [2011-03-09 14:07:11 +0000 UTC]
no I fused D&D with Star Wars XD
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Charlene-Art [2010-12-04 13:24:08 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha ha ha! I like your description of that typical character! It's so cliched! I'm so tired of them too... And I love how you depict him in a scene you don't usually find in these stories. Nice. His expression is priceless.
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FionaCreates In reply to Charlene-Art [2010-12-13 14:14:14 +0000 UTC]
the cliched character can work, it's what you do with the character that matters.
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beblue [2010-09-01 13:21:17 +0000 UTC]
Aw, you got rid of the drunk gnomes? ):
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beblue In reply to FionaCreates [2010-09-01 16:27:00 +0000 UTC]
Aww. ): I know how that goes.
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FionaCreates In reply to beblue [2010-09-01 16:32:58 +0000 UTC]
but I got it finished and in on time soooooo... XD I wasn't spending weeks on it to just go "oh no gnomes ergo no entry" XD
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beblue In reply to FionaCreates [2010-09-01 17:30:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah and now you're all 'it's already submitted I'm not makin' any changes!!'
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FionaCreates In reply to beblue [2010-09-01 17:49:48 +0000 UTC]
yeah... because I'll make nu art now XD
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FionaCreates In reply to fatnassi [2010-09-01 00:15:31 +0000 UTC]
He needs a name... what kind of name does OrphanCountryBoyHero have...?
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FionaCreates In reply to fatnassi [2010-09-01 00:26:46 +0000 UTC]
no he's not a sue because he's not godpowered etc... he's just a archetype cliche, which does actually work within narrative works if the writer is good.
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FionaCreates In reply to fatnassi [2010-09-01 01:29:01 +0000 UTC]
because he comes from a line of kings, but has been hidden away because his kingly father was killed, and when he comes of age he can return to his kingdom and claim his throne XD
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fatnassi In reply to FionaCreates [2010-09-01 01:32:44 +0000 UTC]
Or so he tells everyone he meets. Made the mistake of saying that within earshot of the orc lady.... *grin*
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FionaCreates In reply to fatnassi [2010-09-01 01:49:58 +0000 UTC]
who's decided she want's to be Queen Orc Lady but CyberpunkCentaur Lady had her eyes on it first naturally XD
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Kayarie [2010-09-01 00:07:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh no! It would seem our hero has found himself out of his comfort zone! Hehe I really enjoy this piece. The expressions on your character faces being my favorite. I wish you the best of luck on the contest! Really great work and surely a piece to watch out for in the competition! <3
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FionaCreates In reply to martypunker [2010-09-01 00:05:10 +0000 UTC]
I was just worried people would see it as 'unfinished' instead of 'I chose to work this way'
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Mongoose9634 [2010-09-01 00:02:57 +0000 UTC]
awesome work!
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