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FioryTrinity — Bleeding Love [NSFW]

Published: 2010-02-15 01:17:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 357; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description So I'm sitting at work, bored out of my skull today, and I realize that today is Valentine's Day. So I pop onto Youtube and start rummaging through some amvs and I stumble upon one with Leona Lewis singing "Bleeding Love". Well, I actually liked the version of the song that this popped out in response.

I'm actually kinda fond of it, now that I've looked at it colored and everything. It wasn't quite what I had in mind at first (At first it was going to be Fiory, but as it progressed, it became some nameless chick..), and it's horribly emo which I'm not...but all in all, I kinda like it.

Anyway, Comments and Critiques are always welcome. I know that the anatomy is a little off, but at least I'm improving right? *stares off in the silence....crickets start chirping*....<.<''''''''' Lol jk.

And I'm putting a warning on it, just cause...well...tis a lot of blood...

"Bleeding Love"
Sung by Leona Lewis

Closed off from Love, I didn't need the pain.
Once or twice was enough, and it was all in vain.
Time starts to pass, and before you know it your frozen.

Something happened for the very first time with you
My heart melted to the ground, found something true.
And everyone's looking around, thinking I'm going crazy.

[Chorus]But I don't care what they say, I'm in love with you.
They try to pull me away, but they don't know the truth.
My heart's crippled by the vein that I keep on closing.

You cut me open,
And I keep bleeding, keep keep bleeding love.
keep bleeding, keep keep bleeding love
keep bleeding, keep keep bleeding love...
You cut me open.[/chorus]

Trying hard not to hear, but they talk so loud.
Their piercing sounds fill my ears, try to fill me with doubt.
Yet I know that the goal is to keep me from falling.

But nothing's greater then the rush,
That comes with your embrace.
And in this world of loneliness I see your face,
yet everyone around me thinks that I'm going crazy.
Maybe, Maybe...

[Chorus]

And it's draining all of me,
Oh they find it hard to believe.
I'll be wearing these scars for everyone to see.

[Chorus]

You cut me open
And I keep bleeding, keep keep bleeding love.
Keep bleeding, Keep keep bleeding love.
Keep bleeding, keep keep bleeding...love.....

you cut me open and I.
Keep bleeding..keep keep bleeding..Love.



Hope you all had a fine Valentine's Day.
Pic (c) Fiory
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Comments: 8

SlixSatori [2010-02-15 17:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done hun. Happy late SA Day as I like to call it. teehee. Hope you had a good one with the boyo

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FioryTrinity In reply to SlixSatori [2010-02-16 19:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Yeah we had a good time. He took me out to Susumo, which I had never been to before, so that was pretty awesome.

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SlixSatori In reply to FioryTrinity [2010-02-17 19:17:42 +0000 UTC]

nice *thumbs up*

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rempage [2010-02-15 02:37:32 +0000 UTC]

I was a bit confused too at how the song influenced this piece. I am a fan of the song and it's pretty uppity for the most part. I knew before I read the description, however, that the song inspired it. (How many songs do you know that say "bleeding love" in them? XD ).

For beating yourself up on the anatomy, you actually did a very good job here The blood looks very natural and the hair flows really naturally too. I like how you incorporated the hearts into the blood. All in all, it's good in my opinion.

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FioryTrinity In reply to rempage [2010-02-16 19:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Rempage. I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the comment,

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XxXPink-KittenXxX [2010-02-15 01:35:33 +0000 UTC]

Let's see...

First off, I don't quite get what your message is. It may have a lot to do with this song, which I haven't heard, so I have no room for judgment, there.

The lines are a bit less "flowy" than they could be. This is, of course, a preference of mine, but I feel as though the line art is too confined. Maybe that only makes sense to me.

As for realism, I think you captured the blood accurately. I see how it has flowed, and even where it has splattered. (On the thigh from the right breast.)

The obscured face is artful in my opinion, and the colors seem appropriate for the theme. Overall, I think it's good, with some room for improvement. I enjoy watching your works and look forward to the next, Fiory.

~Pink<3

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FioryTrinity In reply to XxXPink-KittenXxX [2010-02-16 19:44:20 +0000 UTC]

I didn't really have a message..it was literally, random Song-Inspired-art. But I am glad you like it anyway .

And yeah, my pen was kinda starting to die on me, tis why the lineart is a little on the sketchy side..-.-' stupid pen...I gotta invest in an actual sketch pen or inking pen set or something...ballpoint just ain't cutting it...lol

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Kodi9 [2010-02-15 01:26:14 +0000 UTC]

i really like this.

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