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firagare — Not the usual kind 01
Published: 2014-07-31 04:56:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2243; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 3
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This is my entry for the contest!It was really fun to draw! XD
At first I thought the comic would be two pages long, but it seems it turned out otherwise.
Anyway, it was fun to draw!
My favourite part was the inking, which is weird.
Once the sketch was done, the inking and colouring were easy, though the coloring took a while. 
Page 1
I'm happy about how Raze on the left of the page came out. At last I managed to do a decent drawing of a kid.
If you're wondering why is Brick calling his friend, which decided to ignore im and drink something cool instead, its because they basically buried him in the sand while he took a nap. That's the reason he has a pile of sand on him.
I added Rade and Rake for two reasons: 1) Points; and 2) They need more love.
As you can see, they barely appear on deviations, so it's nice to bring them to life now and then. ;3
Page 2
Uh... let's say this was my least favourite page. I messed up Rave's hair and appearance. Badly. (I'm so sorry! T_T )
Besides that, I like the evil aura durrounding Raze.
Page 3
The end of the comic.
My favourite panel were the last three.
Their expressions. They came out better than expected.
BTW, anyone thinks that Rage in the 4th panel looks like Loki from Mythical Sleuth Loki: Matantei Loki Ragnarok?
That's it! ^^
Enjoy~!
PAGES:
First page:firagare.deviantart.com/art/No…
Second page:firagare.deviantart.com/art/No…
Third page:firagare.deviantart.com/art/No…
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And in case you don't inderstand my handwriting, I'll write you down the dialogue between characters.
DIALOGUE
Raze: Ah~! What a nice place to relax! Raze: It has the perfect weather! 
Brick: Guys... help me outta here! *while being buried in the sand at a high temperature* *Ignore the order and drink a refreshing lemonade* Raze: There's nice people around!
Rake: Heh, heh, see ya! *surfing on a shark*
Rade: Waaaah! SHARK!! *about to lose balance* Raze: And extreme surfing contests! Raze: Where could Rage and Rave be?Oh! There they are!
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Por si no le entienden a mi letra les dejo el diálogo a continuación.
(Y su debida traducción)DIÁLOGO
Raze: ¡Ah~! ¡Qué buen lugar para relajarse! Raze: Tiene el clima perfecto. Brick: Chicos... ¡ayúdenme a salir de aquí! *atorado en la arena con el insoportable calor* *Ignoran la orden y en su lugar beben una refrescante limonada* Raze: ¡Hay gente buena! Rake: Je, je ¡Nos vemos! *surfeando en un tiburón* Rade: ¡Aaaah! ¡¡TIBURÓN!! *a punto de perder el equilibrio* Raze: ¡Y concursos de surf extremos! Raze: ¿Dónde podrán estar Rage y Rave?¡Oh! ¡Ahí están!
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Haha te quedo muy padre x3 te deseo lo mejor en el concurso
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¡Muchas gracias!
Me alegra que te haya gustado. ^^
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Hahah sí x3 por cierto, anunciare los resultados mañana, para que estés pendiente xP
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Okie dokie. 
Ya mañana estaré más libre. ^^
(Es que últimamente mis compañeros del grupo y yo nos hemos visto algo apurados con un evento que tendremos mañana. Así que después de eso estaremos con más libertad. ;3 )
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Ohhh espero les vaya muy bien
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Muchas gracias. ^^
Ya verás que sí. >w<
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Aww~, I'm glad it made you smile~! x3
He just want to nom on what he loves. (a.k.a. people)
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