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Published: 2008-05-14 17:02:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 520; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 38
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One last thing I beg you please, just before you goI've watched you fly on paper wings half way round the world
until they burned up in the atmosphere and sent you spiraling down
Landing somewhere far from here with no one else around
To catch you falling down
And I'm looking at you now..
This took a surprisingly shorter time than I thought it would.
My gryphon character soars amongst the clouds. c:
I suck at clouds. Oh well XDD
Ailleroën & Art © Me
Lyrics © Rise Against
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I´ll give you few pointers. Those wings don`t look like flying would be fun with them, for they are so skinny looking. And yes, gryphons are magical imaginary things, but using few refs won`t hurt.
Also the placement of the wings looks slightly akward since he doesn`t seem to have much flying muscles in his back.
I took the liberty to redline it a bit: [link]
and next time when you draw one of these critters, these refs might be useful:
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On additional note, when the sun is behind his other side, his this side should be in shadow.
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Aw, thank you a lot for the crits! n__n This was my first gryphon and I will definitely keep that in mind next time, XD I really screwed up the wings, I realised that soon after. c:
But, much appreciated n_n
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Oh woooow, everything in this makes me foam at the mouth, basically. o-o A-m-azing!
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Eh. You already know I think this is awesome! <3
-faves-
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Ahhh! O_O So beauteeefulll. I'm lovin the pose and his face especially. < 3
You are way too hark on yourself. The clouds look so poofy and hugable. :3
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oh i really love the way u drew the motion and the clouds are perfect ! 83 definately to my favourites >>
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