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Firedog1 — Detriment in Blue Crest
Published: 2011-11-19 01:58:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 284; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description     I was on my way home at midnight,the streets were quiet and it felt good to finally be alone. I had been on the streets all day long and being in Blue Crest, California the streets were always filled.  Although I guess I don't really have a home because my parents died a year ago when i was 15 and I have been living in juvie ever since because I  was the one who killed them.  I did it out of my own wanton ways, they were never home and I felt like they never cared about or loved me.  So one day when they were both sleeping ,I took my dads gun and  reluctantly pulled the trigger. I  veered since then and I know what I did was wrong but there's no going back now.  
    
    After I got out of juvie I moved here incognito because everyone in my old town definitely won't venerate me after the stunt I pulled. Tomorrow I start school at Blue Crest High and I'm hoping I can start my new gingerly life without anyone here to stop me.
    
Ring Ring Ring Ring! My eyes were barely open as I reached my hand over to hit the snooze button, but then I remembered it was my first day of school and it was important not to be tarty.  I jumped of bed at the hotel I was staying at,quick put on a pair of ripped jeans and a black shirt with a skull on it ,I didn't even bother to comb my hair or have a bowl of cereal.  I ran down the stairs and was on my way to school.
    When i finally arrived, I went to my homeroom and  sat in the back corner as I usually did when I went to a new school. I saw a lot of people walk in but there was one that especially caught my attention. Her name was Jade. Her porcelain skin shined as she walked slowly into the classroom and I quickly turned my head away when our eyes met. The teacher walked in wearing all black and announced herself as being Mrs.Teeger ,then began to call role. "Jade,Saphire,Ryder,Jimmy,Juliette,Violet, Xavier" when I heard my name I avowed and rose my hand.  

    When she finished calling role the bell rang which meant going to 1st period. I got out of my seat and walked out into the congested hallway and went to my first class then second and my classes had nothing special about them until eight period when I saw Jade sitting like a statue with her eyes staring into space.  I realized she had the darkest brown eyes that melted into her face.  Not watching where I was walking I bumped into Jimmy.  Jimmy seemed like he gets along with people and doesn't  really mind anyone.  I had apologized to him and we started to talk about what school i was at last and it seemed like me and him would be good friends.

    Jimmy and i were talking for quite a while,when he introduced me to his friend Ryder.He was incredibly tall and sporty looking with his flowy,oblique, golden hair. The bell rang and it was time to begin civics class.  I walked through the rows in which Jade was sitting ,because i wanted to see her face again. As i was walking,a girl with fiery red hair stopped me in my tracks."My name is Saphire,"she said proudly."Would you like to sit next to me?"she asked banterful. I said okay and sat down as i began to listen about the legendary historical figures.

   Once the day was over i walked out of the school with everyone else.  I was about two blocks from my hotel when Jimmy,Ryder,Saphire,and Jade caught up with me.  It turns out that they were all best friends. Jimmy asked if they could walk with me to my house but I said I didn't have one and that I live in a hotel. They were all speechless and were trying to keep the conversation minimized.I got in front of the hotel ,said my goodbyes then made my way to my room thinking about all my new friends.

I looked out the window and saw them still standing there with confused looks on their faces.  I tried to open the window but it was so durable I broke the handle and scratched off the paint so it looks like i maimed it and now its invalidated.  Since they were still standing there I ran out the door and went outside to ask them what was wrong. They asked me where my parents were and why I am living in a hotel. My face turned pale and my eyes started watering but I just told them that they were away for a while and my house was being fixed up. As I thought about my parents detriment filled the air and my heart sank,then i rushed through the doors and back up to my room. They all were in shock just standing there clueless.I knew I had just lost a friendship and soon they would know about my antics.
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felinefantasy [2011-11-19 02:07:02 +0000 UTC]

great writing work! this is a master piece!

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Firedog1 In reply to felinefantasy [2011-11-19 02:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank You!!!

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