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Published: 2006-02-06 06:07:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 5209; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 95
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Corel Photopaint 12. Completely done with airbrushing and smudge tools. Several hours. 37 layers
Dedicated to ~JabbaTheSlut for hitting my something000th kiriban (I know you asked for Woody and Buzzlightyear, but those characters hate me ¬¬)
Special thanks to ~Hikari-Nell for her advice during the progress of the pic.
Lineart by me
Colors by me
Awesomeness by me
Naruto is copyrighted to Masashi Kishimito and Shonen Jump.
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Comments: 51
dear god if you have proof then why don't you post a journal about it
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yo tambien soy fana de naruto!!!
no sabia q te gustaba!!!
muy buen trabajo!!!
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Sorry dude. I just couldn't do it. I drew over 10 sketches, for real. None of them felt good.
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el cielo te quedo... super ocaso like.
pero... i must say, hay cosas que deben ser mejoradas...
las proporciones de la figura estan bien definidas y armonicas....pero, en cuanto a la grama, y al paisaje exterior... hay asuntos de perspectiva que influyen en las tonalidades de los colores y ahi va mi critica,... esos dos elementos se ven demasiado planos, y.. considerando los lineamientos estilisticos de la pieza, la grama debe ser mas tupida en cuanto a textura se refiere... el fondo de atras no tiene k tener detalle, pero si ciertos tonos k le dan mas profndidad, en tu caso, son tonos mas verdeoscuro y verdeazlado oscuro k formen manchas mas uniformes k asemejen follage.. pero k no lo sean.. todo eso pa k se vea como k se va pa traaaaaa....... pero na.. la textura de la ropa se ve bien... con mucho contraste, pero bien, yo la haria mas sutil y si, le dejaria las lineas tambien, pero menos contrastantes o "sharped".... that would be all i have to say : )....
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Gracias por el comentario mano, muy apreciado. Entiendo lo de la perspectiva de los objetos del fondo. Ciertamente hay que mejorarlos. El contraste es asΓ a propΓ³sito 
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tu sabe.. aca estamos para ser segundos ojos de nuestros amigos...
bueno, el punto del contraste ahora que se que lo adoptaste concientemente pues.. creo quen es admisible como decision del artista.. pero habiendo dicho ya lo que pude en cuanto a critica se refiere.. ya usted sabe que hacer y como mejorarlo en caso de que asi sea : ) keep the good work on men... ther's allways good stuff comming out of you : )
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Thanks bro
Oh, si no me ves en lΓnea es porque no tengo internet en mi casa ahora
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Oh, now i see!
Hand still a bit short, because you have missed something. What? Look at your sketch - [link] - the case of a body is lifted above than Naruto's in your picture. Also look at hands - because of prospect they should be much farther from a body. On your pic it's too close. That's why it look
short.
But you make a great work in coloring and shading. Great light. And just a wonderful backgroung , especially sky.
Good job!
A little advice if you don't mind - During a decline the sun shines around all in orange-red colors. Just like a sky.
It will be good if you will put a little this colors on Naruto and grass.
You make a well done!
P.S. Sorry for my english
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Thanks for the comment! Real critique is hard to find, so, very much appreciated
I see what you mean about his position, and I kinda figured out and tried to fix it (if you compare this with the other stages, you'll notice that the lower part of his torso is "lifted". But yeah, it wasn't enough
thanks again, your help is very valious.
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You're very welcome! ^_^
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Hot damn, that is one impressive sky.
The only thing I can point it out is the head and neck. It looks a tad strained, I'd have expected him to be looking more to the right(his right, that is) for a more natural feel.
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indeed.. i never noticed... well, let's just say there was a bug around and he tried to avoid it when the pic was "shot"
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wow, that looks cool ^^
it's really not easy without lineart !
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I also did the lineart in the computer, although I generally do them with pencil
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Awesome detail! 
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Thanks, seems the effort paid
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WEPA PAPA, TE ME TA llendo alante!!!(deja acelera pa poder alcansarte)
aparte de eso :
me gusta mucho las nubes(se ven muy reales),
y la gramita nitida
ademas las luces y las sombras no hay q decir
pero no me gustan las lineas, como en los pantalones: se ven como muy fuaaaa
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los anime normalmente tienen las lΓneas, pero realmente no pegan con el estilo del dibujo, ciertamente...
el cielo tiene como 50 colores 
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wow, thats really cool!! i dig the light source, and the colors you choze..
i think naruto needs a bit more of an outline tho, i dunno, maybe its just me..
i also really like the sky
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hmmm, well, it doesn't really have an outline... I just sketched the pose with the mouse and colored on it
Maybe I should just remove the rest of the lines.... what do you think?
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even if there is no lines, maybe try ta define his outline a little more...
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you really and truelly are a blessed artist, you're work always astounds me. I am just very happy to see the final version and might i say, it really don't suck, lol.
Just incredable bab. 
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37 layers?!
I like how well done the sky is, looks like its watercoloured.
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the hair has like 3 layers, the grass has like 5 or 6, and the sky has other several as well...
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YAY!!! NARUTO!!!! that is awesome!!! Great job!
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Your so very welcome!!!
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Holy crap that sky is awesome. All....watercolory and stuff. Hell...I'm not very awake right now, I'll write more later kay?
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