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Published: 2013-11-09 21:17:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 321; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 1
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I'm a Nobodie, see?There's just some notes where my heart should be.
Sill it's plain to tell
That doesn't mean I'm not doing well.
In fact if you listen closely on hills afar,
You might hear the ehcoing sitar
Playing your goodbye, au revior.
No I won't be a maytar
I'm just some schemer
Some might go far as to call me a dreamer
I'm a Nobodie, see?
There's just some notes where my heart should be.
(Haha I suck at poems)
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((*cries forever over your artwork and poetry*
If anything, my poetry sucks... I mean, I have one up, but... >_< I don't think it's anything special...))
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Thanks. Really I just slap down what ever comes to mind. If your just starting out and want to make something good, I suggest choosing the format you want to work with (like a haiku or something) and then think about a topic and how it makes you feel, and then just write it down a few hundred different ways until it sounds good.
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((Wuh. Thanks for the advice.
Do you think you could... Uh.. I dunno grant me a bit of, uhh, a critque? On my, uh, poem, I mean... Just to tell me what you think of it... And all that... 'Cause no one seems to really care about my poem enough to comment or some crap... Or read it... I think... I, uh... asked for a critque on it the ghetto way (LIKE A BOSS) because I don't have a premium account thingy. BWUH, SORRY IF I SOUND LIKE I'M ADVERTISING. ))
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Could you send me a link?
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((Oh sure! *DERP*))
aquashadow3.deviantart.com#/arβ¦
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Did... Did you write this? O_O Wow. You're both an epic artist and an epic poet, my friend. AND. THIS. DOES. NOT. SUCK!
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Omg! Thank you so much!
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You're welcome!
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