Comments: 15
dannyshutyerface [2015-10-19 16:04:40 +0000 UTC]
wHY THE END WAS SO DRAMATIC IT HURTS.
"I shouldn't have looked back."
I feel your pain, come gimme a hug >n<
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alixbolster [2013-10-21 16:15:25 +0000 UTC]
someone needs to continue this story its awsome
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D2021 [2013-08-10 06:31:56 +0000 UTC]
T.T I can't see part two. that sucks. but you did good on this. ^^
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TheEvilAngel724 [2013-04-15 09:49:02 +0000 UTC]
I CAN'T SEE IT
NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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TheEvilAngel724 In reply to FireTrance [2013-04-16 08:59:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh my damn
That was
THE BEST
I would have liked it a tad more if Vlad hadn't been watching
But still
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Raiu-Shikai [2013-03-05 22:08:59 +0000 UTC]
i read it now i cant see it dam it
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maxxshrek [2012-12-04 07:34:01 +0000 UTC]
Please continue! I loved it do much but I want a happy ending! Vlad can't get away with this !
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FireTrance In reply to maxxshrek [2012-12-04 09:53:31 +0000 UTC]
Haha~ I think he already has ;3 He got to watch Danny and Phantom act out his fantasies, after all If I did continue it (which is a big IF, mind you), I would have to expand on his plotting and then he'd get what's coming to him.
For now, just imagine Vlad lets Phantom live, Danny's and Phantom's interactions following this are filled with a lot of yelling, awkward pauses, more yelling, sudden fights, barbed flirtations, close-quarters fighting (like wrestling so they can touch each other), random passionate kisses, more yelling after said kisses, more fights, more groping-disguised-wrestling, more flirting, and somewhere along the way they start to fall in love. Love/Hate relationships are fun like that ;D
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waja-redeemer [2012-11-17 22:45:35 +0000 UTC]
You have made me a fan of Pitch Pearl, so congratulations. Now on to the (very positive) critique: The story was very well written. It had just enough to description, allowing visualizations, but not making the story slow and boring. Even though it's derogatory, it was somehow elegant. That probably has to do with your writing style. Also, there were little-to-no spelling/grammatical errors! Nothing takes you out of the story like an error. Job well done!
Also, I am a big fan of your collaborative Stolen Sapphire story. Best "bordeline smut" (as it was put in the authors note, lol) that I've read thus far.
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Iamazadrgirl [2012-07-03 16:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Aww... THat is how it ends? That's sad
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Echoheartx [2012-06-20 01:37:43 +0000 UTC]
God damn. Can I marry you? Please? This is the best thing ever okay.
How can you not think you did the picture justice? You outdid yourself, this is so much better than the picture. You did very well for not writing anything raunchy before. Kudos~
Phantom's excitement over seeing Danny's chest is adorable. Ack, and the way you ended it... My heartstrings.
I am just loving this so very much.
Also, that Avengers reference there. Oh. My. God. I have a massive obsession with that right now you have no idea. That had me pleasantly surprised. :'D
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Mystieka-Senko [2012-06-16 20:26:21 +0000 UTC]
OmG happy late birthday from me!
This was lovely and not half-assed at all. Great job as always, you have the ability to show us these wonderful conflicted emotions. Please keeping making me awe struck please?
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