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Firewolf-Anime — Moonlight Soul Chapter 1 - 019
Published: 2011-08-29 17:01:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 5066; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Noooo! The poor bunny >_<
But Zane's "urk" face is adorable <3
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I had fun with it, haha!
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2nd and 3rd panels are just loaded in Zane cuteness!
And I LOVE THAT RABBIT!
It's SO cute! 8D
4th panel Zane looks adorable too, and I find the 5th panel excellent. I mean, he said he's almost an adult, but his expression has been still that of a puppy, as well as a bit of personality quirks, however, in the 5th panel you really see his true determination and how forced he is for that rabbit, and it truly makes him look like an adult!
You did a great job portraying that!
(or maybe I'm just reading too into this xD)
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WARNING: HUGE COMMENT!!!
I'm in a good mood: Gonna talk about each pannel!
First: The expression is very good, but I had a bit of trouble with the anatomy. I didn't know what happened at first. Not sure if its just me, tough.
Second: I really liked his face, good job on expressing his feelings! The way you did his ears helped a lot to understand he's hiding. Really liked this one, my fave!
Third: Perfect! You got the size of Zane and the bunny perfectly. I usually have trouble with this. Also good anatomy with the rabbit.
Fourth: My favorite pannel from the whole page: The anatomy is very nice, and his face stayed so cute! Congrats on this one!
Fifth: On the other page he looked like a teen, now he looks like an adult. But his expression is very nice. Also, I noticed when you do just the "frontal part" of a wolf(dunno what's the right word to this one. Just from the belly to the head xD), the belly usually is too thin in comparison to the rest of the body. I dunno if this is your style, and that's just my opinion.
lol I think I got a bit excited 
FAN COMMENT:
AHHHH!!! CUTIE ZANE!!! HE'S SO ANSWOME!!!!
*sits like a dog when is asking for food and begs* Please... Do the next page fast!!! I wanna see if its really what I think its gonna happen!!!
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Thanks for the huge comment XD
As for the 5th panel, I accidentally made Zane too adult in his musculature xD. As for Zane's belly, that's my style for my wolves and also it's to show perception. You know, like nearer is bigger and farther is smaller ;D (Also if I made his stomach bigger, he'd look too adult.
I hope to have more out soon xD What you think may happen, could be within a few pages. *wink wink, nudge nudge
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Hehe no prob! I got a bit carried away
Yeah, I understand. I thought it was from your style, considering you do this every time xD
Please...make me happy! I'll be a good girl and stop bothering you with this!
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i loveee the expresions, and such lol, this is such a good comic! dont stop!
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