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fireyes-lit — Melancholy Hope

Published: 2004-04-08 20:24:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description I promise I will try to believe
In the truth behind your honesty
I tell myself I’ll win…again…and again.
I lie to myself again.
But when you look into my dreams
Do you see yourself there holding me
Or do you see the fears
Masquerading as excessive tears?

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Let me drown in the freshness of your kiss
Let me suffocate in you enduring grip
My love, I swear to you today
I will die in the most pleasant way
In your arms
Take me to heaven in your arms…

I’ve looked around and tried to forget
That this is mutual benefit
I tell myself I’m free…believe…just believe.
Try to make myself believe.
And when you dive into my heart
Do you see how I’m falling apart
Or do you just wonder
How such a fragile stone could falter?

Chorus

Bridge:
Death by chocolate and sprinkles
Death by sweetness
Death by the fact that I cannot feel this.
Let me drink of this love
And survive till I wake up
From this melancholy hope I have.

Chorus
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Comments: 10

deadieandBBJM727 [2004-04-12 00:58:05 +0000 UTC]

wow. that's all i have to say, wow. and keep writing that is.

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fireyes-lit In reply to deadieandBBJM727 [2004-04-13 23:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. It's so nice to hear that my writing has such a porweful impact on people....

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deadieandBBJM727 In reply to fireyes-lit [2004-04-15 04:32:23 +0000 UTC]

you're so very welcome

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B1uRav3n [2004-04-09 01:36:39 +0000 UTC]

awesome job......very good job lol keep up the awesome stuff

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fireyes-lit In reply to B1uRav3n [2004-04-10 03:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you. hehe. Feel free to stop by again.

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AfraidToDrown [2004-04-08 23:02:13 +0000 UTC]

this is really great! i love it soo much!!
good job!

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fireyes-lit In reply to AfraidToDrown [2004-04-10 03:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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GadienRea [2004-04-08 20:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Let that big head swell! You deserve it!!

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GadienRea [2004-04-08 20:26:44 +0000 UTC]

My God.. You're.. BRILLIANT!!!

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fireyes-lit In reply to GadienRea [2004-04-08 20:45:40 +0000 UTC]

*blush* you're gonan make me get a big head. lol. You're so sweet. Thank so much..i'm glad you liek my work!

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