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Chia-P [2016-02-25 00:57:30 +0000 UTC]

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I really enjoy the flow of direction in the linework as well as the apparent effort put into into the shoulder, the clothing, and of course the hair! The contrast put into skin is very soft, and the contrast in the hair gives off a nice shine. The outfit is also very stylish!

Vision: The expression really gives off this cold stare, while the eyebrows suggest a carelessness to me... Awesome!

Originality: The detail of the outfit has me up to a 3, but the additional use of texturing for the folds did push it up another 0.5!

Technique: The linework really payed off, and the highlights on the shoulder piece bumped the rating up a star in my book!

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Ientina1234 [2016-03-13 08:32:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow , this is very awesome!

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Zakthebeast21 [2016-02-29 21:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Nice! Maybe add some tattoos?

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Laylabelle97 [2016-02-29 02:58:45 +0000 UTC]

I like how you've given this texture. The hair has some nice shading and highlights, even though it does look like large strands made separate. I like the design of the hat, with the little pearls dangling, and the lace is well done. i have a hard time drawing lace. Her eyes are very stylized and big and pretty, and I like how you've done her eyelashes, but I don't think they really fit the more realistic style of the rest of the drawing. I think they look a little too big for her face. 

Her nose is well done, and I like how bold the line of it is. While the shape of her mouth is nice, the details in her lips look a little too wrinkly. I would do a solid shading there. 
I like the design of her armor/shirt. But her waist is too small compared to her arms.

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Arasteia [2016-02-25 22:29:27 +0000 UTC]

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First of all, this is a really cool steampunk design! As a steampunk fan myself, I can really appreciate what you’ve done here. The design is well-balanced, particularly around the arms (I love the pauldron on one shoulder and the glove on the other arm), and I love the neckpiece.

Anatomically, the left shoulder and arm (to our left) look a bit big for the angle her body seems to be turned. They also seem a bit too far extended from the body for that angle. But that might be the anatomical error you noticed? There’s also something that’s a bit off for me about her eyes, though that might just be your style. At first I thought it was sizing, because they do look just that tiny bit oversize to me, but now I think it’s because the irises aren’t touching the bottom and to me it’s making them look a bit strangely proportioned. I also noticed that the left eye (again to our left) is a bit higher on her face than the right, which seems a bit off because of the way her head is angled (I think it should be lower than the right).

But I love the way you’ve done the hair, details and shading (though I think this could be even better if you made the light source a little more obvious on her bodice, it looks a bit flat to me).  

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theFuryHearted13118 [2016-02-25 05:40:02 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! I like how much detail you put in there!

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IDEGZ [2016-02-24 21:12:58 +0000 UTC]

that creative, you have imagination for this type of work

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Comments4You [2016-02-24 15:42:26 +0000 UTC]

The Victorian inspired clothing is really awesome right here. Fantastic work!

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DoubleDandE [2016-02-23 20:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice steampunk armor design there. It came out great, along with the shading and everything. 

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starfast99 [2016-02-23 15:38:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow! This is beautiful

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