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Published: 2017-01-06 15:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1703; Favourites: 124; Downloads: 0
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First artwork done in 2017~A concept of Tarot x Horoscope.
Inspired from a friend who loves to read tarot card. I always got THE DEATH when i pick a set of cards for her to read~
The Death represent big changes/ transformation~
I know it's January, The Devil. But, i wanna start this with my sign~ mwahaha~
Experiment with marker~
I record my drawing, will post it soon~
Tools & material:
A4 paper, drawing pen, brush pen, finecolor marker, white gel pen.
Aluca belongs to me.
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Comments: 82
Helloo~ thank you so much for the compliments and critiques, dear! I really appreciate it! Glad you like my work~
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Np! Sorry for the super late reply ;;
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For a traditional piece, this is very good. It's a little full and I see a few places where anatomy was slightly off, but other than that, this really good. I think if your work was a little spaced out and the colors were a little more differentiated or if you added one more color to help viewers pick out different parts, it would help you. Right now, due to everything clustered together, it's a bit hard to pick out everything. I want to find everything, but I'm getting a minor headache because it's overdone. For example, I like her pose, but I had to look to find it. You can still have a lot in a piece if you know how to differentiate everything. Wonderful piece, regardless! Considering traditional media is harder, this is great work! Keep it up!
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Yay! Another one of your pieces for me to critique! As usual, your line work is very impressive, and the character herself looks amazing. I also love that light gray shading in some of these places, like the character's legs and hands. All that stuff going in the background, despite being in abundance, looks very well done. My only problem comes in the character's face, as her mouth kind of looks off, and her closed eyes have no shading. But other than that, I think it's another one of your amazing macabre pieces. I am so glad I followed you.
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Aww thank you so much, dear! I'm so happy that you like this drawing~
Thanks for the critique! I'll practice more in anatomy~
Ehehe i'm so happy have your supports in here ^^
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The first thing I love about this is how you did different forms of death, such as animal death. I also love how the skeletons are wrapping around the girl, symbolizing how death can take capture of people's happiness. She looks so innocent, showing that death can harm EVEN the kindest of people. I think that there should be some darker shades of blue and add some purple. The spiderwebs are a great accent. Adding some more depth in the night sky plus adding more shadows would show the theme. I like the ice, showing how death can be cold. Honestly I believe u have a future in art! I love it!
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Hellooo~ Thank you so much for the critique, dear! I really appreciate it ^^
I'm glad that you enjoy my art! And also, i like your own interpretation of this drawing~ Aluca looks innocent because it's actually her personality~
Also, which ice did you refer to?
I was aiming for monochromatic sceme and playing with value. Therefore, i only use black, white pen and grey marker. Perhaps this drawing will look more interesting in colors, but i like B&W for this theme. Planning to draw the complete series in monochrome. However, thanks for your suggestions! Perhaps i can apply it to another artwork in the future ^^
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Oh I thought the Greyish blue color was ice. Your welcome!
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wow loos so cool and deadly defiantly left a huge impact on me. the background is great with the shadow bunnies and the way you did the lighting and darkness is great i learnt how to do it in art class before with inking but this just took up to like a masterpiece level. i love all the detail the went into this piece like the monstrous scythe . I can clearly how deathly macabre you went with this i can truly see the darkness in your vision. your originality is so great i haven't ever seen a pieces like this in a long time , i don't see much you can improve on but her mouth looks kind off but weird to me but she is absolutely beautiful . i still dont get how yoy made her face look so innocent in the art work. great job 10/10
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aww thank you so much for the critique and compliments, dear ^^
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your welcome hope you continue to make great master pieces like this one in the future
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Awww of course! I'll work harder ^^
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Eehh, how did I miss this one when I first skimmed through your gallery -__- Your detailed traditional works are a strong favorite here, been noticing them more since I came back here.
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Awww thank you so much for the compliments, dear!
Ahahaha i think i can't stop adding more and more details since then XD
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I'd call it a good habit, whenever I see a piece with many details, as a viewer I'm always inclined to look at it longer and explore what the artist has placed and where. It's very curious, like a small journey 
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UUUU, that blue-gray color is absolutely lovely~
Very nice work!
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Hi I will be commenting on behalf of ProjectComment
First I would like to say this looks good. Then I would go on to say it would look way better had you put more time into it. No sweat I make that same patience mistake. I think your line art needs some cleaning up. you would be amazed what you could do with some screening effects like white wash. Also don't be afraid to ink right up against other lines as seen at the edge of hair. you should just clean that up with a white gel based pen. Works great! Your line art in general seems really good but there are some minor things to keep in mind like "doing a complete line in one stroke". If you look at the cloth hanging from her hops you can clearly see a break line. Beyond that some of your line work seems more like you rushed it. Mostly on the left side of the drawing.
Your pose could use some work there but hey I have the same problem with what I call the stiffs. Locking a joint in a straight line like the girl's right Arm. Loosening those joints will make it feel like it flows better.(Tips other deviants gave me). One last tip for clean up. It is kind of hard to explain this, so if it makes no sense tell me and I will try to explain in a better way. When two or more black lined objects overlap on a picture. Use a white gel pen to erase the lines on the edge of the object touching the closes object so it appears to be unconnected. Here is an example
look at the frame in the middle, at the left arm of the guy getting attacked. Look closely at the lines from the girl. you will see none of them touch his line work on the left side. This helps separate the two characters with a offset effect. This effect is good for separating objects so the viewer can see what is what in the picture.
Enough with that. Anyway this is artwork is done really nicely and I am sure you put your heart and passion into your work. So I just want to say keep it up^^
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Hellooo~ thank you so much for the constructive criticism, dear! I really appreciate it! It did take a long time to finished it, maybe my strokes style is messy? XD
thanks for the tips! I'll keep those in mind
Have a great day! ^^
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Messy stokes work. Don't get me wrong. Just try to limit the areas where you place them. Like Keep the background elements separate from the foreground so the image doesn't look flat. I am still learning too. Everybody is, and it is all about keeping everything in mind when you draw. Enjoy and have a nice day too^^
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What are the odds of drawing the death card out of a 78 card deck? My friend did it, and now is in the penitentiary. I love the art style of card! Good job!
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like already mentioned (lol) , I love the details on this pic I could never do such a drawing Im just too lazy I guess 
nice work :3
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Awww thank you so much, dear! don't say tgat, i know you can, too! ^^
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maybe if I am really really bored and only have one paper ..but even then...I guess it would turned out as 100 little sketches
Im really not good with detailed stuff
and welcome
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Aww thank you so much, dear ^^
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Alucaaaa
hehehe bagus nihhh kombinasi warnanyaaa,, jd ky B/W tp ada biru2nya jd cakep
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Wahhh makasih Lydiaaaa~ XD
Itu sebenarnya abu2, tapi gtw kenapa semua org bilang biru~
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loh gubrak xD kliatannya biru... tp gpp deh bagus.
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Holy bajeesus! The amount of detail is absolutely insane; Must've taken forever. I really like the design of the scythe, too.
Awesome job!
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Aww thank you so much,dear! Glad you like it ^^
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So cool drawing >< You open this year with majestic drawing >< wow ><
Let's do the best for 2017 >w<
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Aww thank you so much!
Yess, let's do the best ^^
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That's some really intricate detailing and cool interpretation of the tarot theme!
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love the details, very clean lines, very well drawn 
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Amazing~! Love the sense of movement in this piece and the linework is stellar~!!
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awww thank you so much, dear! You are too flattering ^^
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I like your art, you surprise me with your works, you have talent
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Aww thank you so much! ^^
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