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--Prologue--Vanzilla approached water park, all Louds went out.
Lincoln: Finally! We reached Mermaid Nest.
Leni: [excited] Mermaids? Are we going to see mermaid?
Luan: Yeah! Also triton, capricorn, hydra, kraken, scylla, lamia and even a leviathan. [giggle]
Leni: Oh! So many creatures to see.
Lori: [she and rest of the siblings facepalmed] Don't you get Luan is making fun of you?!
Leni: [sadly] Oh, no! I wanted to see mermaids so much.
Lori: [annoyed] It's a water park! Why do you think we took our swimsuits?
Leni: Ah, Now I get it.
Lincoln: The summer started and have we all will have fun.
Lynn Sr: We took you all because we do hope this time you will behave!
Rita: Most of the times we came to public places we get banned because you couldn't behave civil!
Leni: That's not true!
Lynn: I don't remember those times.
Lincoln: But I have good memory! Community polls, grocery shops, luxury hotels, do I have to continue?
Lola: You missed first concerts.
Luna: Hey! Lincoln's first concert was awesome, so this doesn't count!
Lucy: Visit in Grand Venture State Park was also great!
Rita: Enough! Thing is after all your experiences you all should have behave more mature! You're getting older but you don't learn anything!
Leni: Again not true! We all go to school and pass!
Rita: I didn't mean this! I meant you all should be more responsible for your actions.
Lori: Don't worry! We will watch over each other.
Lynn Sr: Promises, promises. Words are cheap and from all you know that actions speak louder than words!
Rita: I don't want to hear any of you causing even the smallest chaos.
Lynn Sr: We take care of the youngest, when the elder siblings will take care of the youngest.
Lynn: Then I'm taking Lincoln!
Lincoln: This isn't fair! Why me and not Lana?!
Lynn: I don't get why you're never happy when I want to play with you.
10 minutes later all siblings left changing rooms in swimsuits and went to the inner part of the water park. Lincoln got hit by a towel, what turned out to be Lynn's doing.
Lincoln: Ouch! Lynn!
Lynn: You should have been more careful and dodged it. [giggle]
Lincoln: Towels are supposed to be left in changing room!
Lori: This time he's right. If we want to have fun and not get kicked, then we all have to obey literally all the rules! So leave this towel now!
Lynn: Fine! [annoyed whispering] Those petty rules don't let us have true fun.
Lincoln: Please don't get crazy and obey the rules.
Lori: I'm the eldest, so I am supposed to tell this!
Lincoln: [pointing sign "No screaming!"] Ehem.
Lori: [looking at Lincoln] Just don't do anything stupid. [looking at the sisters] This includes all of you. Now dismiss.
--Chapter 1 - Lori's story--
Lori approached a bar and purchased a glass of ice cold water. She heard familiar voices, what attracted her attention. She recognized Becky and Dana, who were lying on benches in their swimsuits and chatting.
Lori: Hello, girls! I literally didn't expect you here.
Dana and Becky: Oh, hi, Lori!
Dana: You're welcome to join us.
Becky: It seems we all had same idea to come here for summer.
Lori: School is over, summer just started, the park is a perfect place.
Becky: I worked hard to pass all subjects. Now I desire nothing more than pure relaxation.
Dana: I worked extra to spare enough to get here. Without Bobby at the department store there is a lot to work.
Lori: [crying] Boooo-byyyy. Waah!
Becky: Dana, you said the taboo word!
Dana: [Facepalm] Oh mine! I forgot. Sorry. [she grabbed hugged Lori] Don't worry. It's alright.
Becky: You can drown your sorrow in this glass of water.
Dana: Or we all can simply relax in spa pool.
Lori: What?
Becky: Jacuzzi.
All three girls came into Jacuzzi.
Lori: Thanks, that's literally what I needed.
Dana: That's what friends are for.
Becky: What a contrast, cold still water in glass and hot bubble water in the tub.
Lori: [relaxed tone, sighing] I feel like those bubbles is literally taking whole this stress from my body.
Suddenly Carol approached the three girls.
Carol: Well, who do we have here.
Lori: My stress just returned.
Dana: You're not welcome here!
Becky: Find yourself other pool.
Carol: So that's how you greet your old friend.
Lori: How can you call yourself our friend?
Becky: You think you're too good for us.
Dana: This expensive swimsuit on you is another sign of looking down on us.
Lori: Scram!
Carol: Who are you to deny me a vacant pool? The water park employees?
Dana: Lori, cool down. She's not worth any stress.
Carol: Just because I'm better than you in fashion sense and school grades, it doesn't mean we have to be such foes.
Becky: Says the girl who keeps comparing us to herself.
Speaker: Attention, beautiful young ladies! I'm inviting you to Hawaii dance contest, the winner will have photo on new advertisement of Mermaid Nest.
Carol: I'm taking part in this. I have dancing talent and beautiful face and attractive body. It would be so nice to have such fame.
Lori: Then I'm taking part too!
Carol: You want a battle, then have it! [she left]
Dana: Are you sure it's worth it?
Lori: She's so snobbish and she doesn't deserve honor of fame.
Becky: Lori, that's just an advertisement.
Lori: But Carol doesn't deserve this. Hey, I have idea. Help me defeat Carol by also participating in the contest. With bigger competition her chances will literally get smaller.
Dana: I'm doing this for you, not against her.
Becky: If this will help you relax, then...
Carol, Lori, Becky and Dana with other contestants got dressed in green grass skirts, coconut bra, flower necklaces and put flowers in their hair. All came on stage.
Carol: My "coconuts" are bigger.
Lori: We're judged for dancing rather than appearance.
Becky: Quiet! Wait for the signal to start.
Speaker: [approaching the contestants] I announce the contest just started. 16 beautiful dancers arrive, but the winner can be only one. I'll play dance music, the better dancing half will go to next round. The same will happen in all 4 rounds.
The speaker played Hawaii dance music and all contestants began dancing. The speaker was very excited by watching how the contestants were moving their bodies, he expressed his enjoyment by smiling. Lincoln and Lynn were walking next to the happening.
Lynn: [annoyed] Why did you stop?!
Lincoln: [blushing] Wow! So many... beautiful girls. And they are wearing so few.
Lynn: We didn't come here for this! We're going on slide! What's with you?
Lincoln: [excited and embarrassed] Just look at them. It's so hypnotizing when they are moving their legs, stomachs, hips and...and... coconuts.
Lynn: Lincoln! You're losing your mind!
Lincoln: [sweating] Today must be really a hot summer day. Suddenly I feel much warmer.
Lynn: [grabbing Lincoln] Then come with me to cool you down! [she took Lincoln away by force]
Carol: Even your brother thinks I'm beautiful enough to win.
Lori: Don't involve him!
Speaker: Alright. Round one is over.
Manager: What's going on here?!
Dana: It's a Hawaii dance contest for new advertisement.
Manager: So that's what you're doing.
Speaker: I can explain.
Manager: No need. All clear.
Carol: Can someone explain me what's going on?
Manager: There is no contest. This guy likes watching pretty girls. He tricked you, so he could watch you. All to sustain his juvenile fantasies.
Lori: No reward for dancing? Girls let's give him a lesson.
Speaker: Boss, I as your worker am supposed to work safely. Please protect me.
Manager: Do whatever you want with him, he's not my concern, I've just fired him.
Speaker: Noooo!
All tricked contestants slapped the speaker and he got kicked out the water park.
Lori, Dana and Becky changed their clothes back to their swimsuits.
Dana: I can't believe the contest was fake. What a malicious man!
Becky: All because he wanted to watch us.
Lori: We were literally fooled like children!
Dana: What are you doing here, Carol?!
Carol: You asked me, if I think I'm better than you. I was tricked just like you.
Becky: What do you mean by that?
Carol: Where am I better? We all are fools, naive enough to fell on such simple trick of an immature man.
Lori: I want forget this and you literally keep reminding me this!
Carol: We all want this. Can we all four just go to spa pool?
Lori: You think we're going to let you go to spa pool with us?
Becky: Lori, she's a victim of the trick just like we are. She deserves this no less than we all.
Dana: Enough of frustration for one day. Let's just go to the spa pool.
Lori: Fine, but I don't want to sit between next to her.
Carol: I knew you're good girls.
Lori, Dana, Becky and Carol sit in Jacuzzi and enjoyed bubbles tickling their bodies much to their pleasure.
--Chapter 2 - Lana and Lisa's story--
Lana and Lisa were approaching a wide wave slider.
Lisa: Because I'm small enough I got free ticket but what's of it if there is nothing that fascinates me?
Lana: Do you always have to be such killjoy?
Lisa: Is it my fault that everything is boring here?
Lana: You'll change your mind soon. Come and try the sliders.
Lisa: Force of gravity pulls people down and hydrogen dioxide minimizes coefficient of friction on surface of the slide to zero.
Lana: Lisa, stop! We're on vacation, not school! I needed to study a lot to pass the class, now I want have fun and no school thing!
Lisa: You'll be surprised because we learn whole time.
Lana: You need a lesson of having fun. Now putt your butt on the slider and race with me.
Lisa: It's obvious you'll go down sooner because your body has bigger mass than mine, so force of gravity will...
Lana: I said no school stuff! Now let's slide!
Lisa and Lana sat together on wide wave slider and went down.
Lana: Woah! That's cool!
Lisa: I see nothing "cool" in getting wet or getting own butt rubbed by surface of slider.
Lana: What about this?! [she pulled Lisa under water]
Lisa: [unintelligible babbling]
Lana: Tell me you liked it!
Lisa: [cough] Why should I lie? My lungs are filled with contaminated water! [she got lifted by Lana and put on her shoulder] What are you doing?
Lana: [Hitting Lisa in back] I'm getting rid of the water from your lungs! Whatever they are.
Lisa: Thanks but you hit too hard!
Lana: Check this! [she took lot of pool water into her mouth]
Lisa: Nothing extraordinary is in this! Also this water contains body fluids!
Lana spit the water up like a fountain and let it drop on her.
Lana: Tada!
Lisa: You just spit yourself! Gross!
Lana: Not grosser than your chemicals! Now this!
Lana took some water to her mouth, spit it in form of stream, run on the other side of the stream and took it again. She made it several times much to Lisa's surprise and disgust.
Lana: And now the grand finale!
Lana dived and burped strongly, so strongly she caused an echo of a sound similar to whale's breath. All other people were spooked by this.
Lisa: Do you have no sense of dignity?!
Lana: Now you sound like Lola, but still better than sounding like a teacher.
Lisa: Can we stop this? Nothing is interesting nor mature in your plays!
Lana: Then may Ms "fun expert" tell me, what she'd like to do now.
Lisa: Hm. Let's watch fish in aquarium.
Lana: This can be cool.
Lana and Lisa went to the aquarium so they would observe fish.
Lisa: Lots of fascinating species.
Lana: At least that's what we both agree.
Lisa: That's Zanclus cornutus, commonly known as Moorish Idol. That's Arothron meleagris.
Lana: Hey, look! One of them gets big like a baloon. What's this? How disgusting! I love it!
Lisa: Antennarius commerson, in your simple language it's Commerson's frogfish.
Lana: Wow! What's this colorful big fish?
Lisa: Scarus frenatus, parrotfish.
Lana: Interesting. [gasp] What monster is this?!
Lisa: Don't worry. That's Manta Ray, it's a fish. It doesn't have standard shape, but it's still a fish.
Lana: Look at this dark room. Deep Sea Fish.
Lisa: Let's go there.
Both sisters went inside the dark room but went out frightened.
Lisa: That was a fascinating experience.
Lana: They all have lamps on heads and so many teeth. [gulp] I wouldn't want such pets.
Lisa: You wouldn't tame such predators.
Lana: Look, a seal outside cage!
Lisa: Do you see those two men with buckets full of fish? They lead the seal because they're gonna make a public performance.
Keeper 1: Attention everyone! I'm inviting you to see performances of our mascot!
Keeper 2: [showing fish] Give your voice 3 times.
The seal did as the keeper told and received a fish.
Keeper 2: Now go on the ball.
The seal went slowly on ball. Then made an 8 on the floor and received another fish.
Keeper 1: Now we'll test the intelligence of seal. Catch only yellow balls.
The keeper was throwing balls in various colors and the seal caught only yellow ones.
Lana: What an intelligent animal.
Lisa: Animals are color blind. I'm sure the yellow balls are poured in fish oil.
Lana: Doesn't matter. What matters is that we have fun watching this. For a moment forget about logic and enjoy.
Lisa: I'll try but I promise nothing.
--Chapter 3 - Lincoln and Lynn's story--
Lynn was carrying Lincoln on her arms as he was still in trance caused by sight of 16 attractive girls in Hawaiian outfits. Lynn threw Lincoln to pool and he returned to reality, but some water came into his mouth.
Lincoln: [cough] What was that for?!
Lynn: So you're back. [sigh] Recently you get crazy on sight of older girls in swimsuits.
Lincoln: [walking out the pool] I don't know why, but their legs and stomachs fascinate me. Finally I can do what I like doing on pools the most. CANNONBALL! [he jumped to pool] I waited long for this.
Lynn: [giggle] You call it cannonball? Watch me! CANNONBALL! [she jumped to pool] TADA! Mine was better.
Lincoln: Pff. It doesn't matter. I had fun and that's all I care about.
Lynn: No sense of competition. That's bad for your motivation.
Lincoln: We came here to rest and have fun, we need no other reasons.
Lynn: If you want to have fun, then come with me on sliders.
Lincoln: [looking on a small slider] Then let's go.
Lynn: Pff. Seriously? This tiny slider is for small kids. I'm talking about this. [she pointed two tube slider]
Lincoln and Lynn went on the tube sliders. Lincoln sit on the left slider, Lynn sit on the right slider.
Lynn: Let's race! [she hit Lincoln's back with her hand]
Lincoln: Aaah!
Lynn: [she fell to water first and laughed] First!
Lincoln: Aaah! [he fell to water and got splashed by Lynn in face]
Lynn: That's for being second! [laugh]
Lincoln: [annoyed] You just wanted a race. Can you for once not want to be the first?!
Lynn: With such thinking I wouldn't be so successful at sports. Now let's try this slider. [she pointed a great screw slider]
Lincoln: Wow. It's gargantuan.
Lincoln and Lynn went on steps to the slider.
Lincoln: So who will slide first?
Lynn: [grabbing Lincoln] We'll slide together!
Lincoln: But that's a slider for one.
Lynn: Down with this! Let's have fun like sis and bro should!
Lynn pushed Lincoln with her own body so they both could slide much to Lincoln's surprise. During slide they were holding each others.
Lynn: Yahoo!
Lincoln: Aaah! You didn't have to push me!
Lynn: Where is fun with no surprise? Admit you're enjoying this slide.
Lincoln: I get dizzy from this screw!
Lynn: That's why this is so exciting!
Lincoln: Nothing exciting in motion sickness! When this ride is going to end?
Lynn: I don't know. As long as I'm with my favorite play companion I don't care.
Lincoln and Lynn fell from the tube to pool. Lynn laughed out of joy, but Lincoln felt sick.
Lynn: That was cool! Did you enjoy?
Lincoln: I'm surprised I didn't barf! I have enough of sliders.
Lynn: You just don't know how to have fun! You should be grateful, because you're the sibling I love playing with the most.
Lincoln: But always in your way. Can we have fun in my way this time?
Lynn: Then what do you want to do?
Lincoln: Wave pool.
Lynn: What? You should have told me before.
Lincoln: You never let to get a word in edgeways.
Lincoln and Lynn walked through lazy river to the wave pool.
Lynn: Where is the wave? Without it there is no excitement.
Lincoln: This time I agree with you. The wave is activated in every half hour. We just have to wait few minutes.
Lynn: Then let's make a race from one wall to another.
Lincoln: Or maybe just stay here.
Lynn: Then let's check who can hold breath longer. [she inhaled and dived]
Lincoln: [sigh]
Lynn: [going on the surface of water] You didn't even try!
Lincoln: Why you're so impatient? Can you just wait?
Lynn: I'm full of energy and I don't get why you aren't.
Lincoln: It seems our argument lasted long enough that the wave is activated.
Lynn: Finally!
Lynn and Lincoln enjoyed the great wave equally. Suddenly Lynn grabbed a swim desk and began using it as surfing desk. Lincoln was terrified, thinking Lynn is risking too much. Lynn enjoyed so much that she closed eyes and didn't notice she's approaching to wall. Lincoln tried to stop her, but the wave was too strong for him. Lynn was caught with skimmer by lifeguard.
Lynn: Hey, what the-
Lifeguard: Are you crazy, little girl?! You were about to hit the wall!
Lynn: I had all under control!
Lifeguard: Wrong! You foolishly risked your life!
Lynn: I was just having fun with surfing!
Lifeguard: You could have get injured, if I didn't catch you! Your "surfing" isn't allowed here!
Lynn: What?! [she jumped out skimmer] Nobody tells me what to do! [she was about to charge but slipped] Aaah!
Lifeguard: [he caught Lynn in skimmer again] Now you're banned in the wave pool! Now leave! [he released Lynn and made her fall on the floor]
Lynn: Ouch!
Lincoln: Lynn! Are you ok?
Lynn: How can I be?! That jerk just banned me in the wave pool!
Lincoln: Be glad only in the wave pool! Did you forget how you were supposed to behave?
Lynn: Give me a break! Where is this jerk?! He's going to have date with my fists!
Lincoln: [grabbing Lynn] Stop it!
Lynn: [angry] Let me go!
Lincoln: No!
Lynn pushed Lincoln, but he was still holding her. In result they both fell on the floor and began rolling. They fell into lazy river.
Lynn: Wow. That was exciting.
Lincoln: Exciting?! Are you crazy?! Do you never learn anything?
Lynn: What?
Lincoln: You got stupid idea to surf in the wave pool. You would have hit the wall and got injured, if the life guard didn't catch you!
Lynn: Only you think like that!
Lincoln: Do you even think about what you do? What's wrong with you?! Do you want to get hurt?! Do you need to get crippled to start thinking?!
Lynn: What a shame. My little bro is lecturing me. I hate when anybody points anything!
Lincoln: And you rather yell and charge on others than admit you're senselessly risking?
Lynn: Stop! Stop talking! You're making me ashamed! I feel so stupid now!
Lincoln: Stop whining. We can play in other places. We can shoot to each others with water guns. [he pointed pool with water guns]
Lynn: Now we're talking. Prepare yourself for defeat!
Lincoln and Lynn came to water guns and began shooting each other and dodging their shots. They both enjoyed it.
--Chapter 4 - Leni and Lola's story--
Leni was lying on air mattress floating among many other people on water in pool. She was relaxing and sunbathing. Soon Lola approached her lying on her own air mattress.
Leni: Lola? I thought you play with other kids.
Lola: I did and I had fun on sliding and many boys kept looking at me.
Leni: You must have fun having such crowd.
Lola: I did until Lucy came and scared them all away. I chased her for scaring my potential followers, but she ran away. Or maybe she disappeared, if she already knows how to appear from nowhere.
Leni: I'm sorry, little sister. By the way where is you swim gown? Aren't you too young for bikini?
Lola: They are not popular anymore. Besides I'm going to take part in Miss Suntan Pageant and win it of course.
Leni: I'm trying to tan simply to look good for my boyfriend, Chaz.
Lola: Oh, I see. If Winston will be one of judges in Miss Suntan Pageant, he'll surely give me 11/10.
Leni: I'm sure about it. I think my front is tanned enough, time for my back. [Leni tried to turn around, but fell to water] Aaah!
Lola: Leni!
Leni: [splashing around] Help! I'm drowning!
Lola: Leni! This pool is not deep!
Leni: [realizing she's not drowning] Ow. [she climbed on her air mattress] Actually that cold was nice after getting warmed by this sunshine.
Lola: You splashed me, so it was nothing nice.
Leni: You know it wasn't intentional.
10 minutes later
Lola: Oh my! Sunbathing is so boring.
Leni: But we're not bathing in suns. We would get burned alive.
Lola: [facepalm] I mean nothing happens. Let's change location. I'd like boat slides.
Leni: I'm in.
Leni and Lola came to boat together and took a slide. In the first time they had fun, so they tried again and again, but more they did it, more bored they were.
Leni: Six times is enough.
Lola: True. Dang it. Everything gets boring so quickly.
Leni: We didn't try this Tween Stare Boat. What a ridiculous name.
Lola: It's Twister Boat! How ironic I'm 10 years younger than you and yet I can read better.
Leni: So no tweens will stare at me. Thank goodness.
Lola: Let's go there.
Lola and Leni went into the location they discussed about. It was a round boat with belts inside a very big and deep pool, but it was empty. They went into the boat with 2 other people.
Leni: I wonder why they call it Twister Boat.
Lola: We need to check it.
Leni: Where is water? What's a point of boat with no water around.
Lola: Here is your answer.
It turned out the pool is getting filled with water. Then big waves appeared and the boat began turning around. All passengers were excited but began to feel dizzy. Leni and Lola went out the boat suffering on seasickness.
Lola: Now after this I prefer boring but safe activities.
Leni: Me too. Let's go back to mattresses.
Lola: I'm so exhausted. Jacuzzi is closer. [she went into pool]
Leni: Lola, it's...
Lola: Quiet! I want relax in this bubble bath. Till it starts working I want to have silence.
In the pool water began bubbling, but Lola felt more disturbed than relaxed. Suddenly water under Lola erupted like a geyser and lifted her much to her fear.
Lola: HELP!
Leni: I tried to warn you it's fountain pool.
Lola: Leni, let me out of here! [she noticed a crowd of people looking at her] Or not. All are looking at me.
Leni: So do you want me to take you or not?
Lola: Just look at me. I'm Lola Loud miss geyser. [suddenly the fountain turned off] Aaah!
Leni: [she caught Lola in her arms] Gotcha!
Lola: Thank you! [she hugged Leni] I could have get injured. You caught me.
Leni: You didn't think I was going to stay and watch, when my sister is falling.
Lola: Leni, I'm tired. I hope you don't mind if I sleep in your arms. [she closed her eyes]
Leni: Sleep well, sister.
Leni returned on her floating air mattress and put herself there. She was holding Lola next to her sleeping.
--Chapter 5 - Luna and Luan's story--
Luna and Luan approached a pool with two round inflatable rafts.
Luan: I invite you to tug of war. Here I prefer tug of wet. [giggle] Get it?
Luna: I wonder, if you keep giggling when I pull you to water.
Luan: You will fall to water. Just be careful to not lose your shirt.
Luna: Don't talk, but let's start. This is war! I have 3 rounds to win.
Luna came on one raft and Luan on another. They grabbed a tug and began pulling it in their sides. Luna won the first round.
Luna: Hope your braces didn't get wet.
Luan: Next round would be so easy.
Luan and Luna began round two. However Luan intentionally didn't pull the tug but only pretended so Luna would pull the tug with full strength and fall to water.
Luna: You didn't pull me! You didn't win this round!
Luan: The one who falls to water loses. Doesn't matter how.
Luna: You tricked me! I don't know if I shall admire your cleverness or be mad at you.
Luan: I hope your next fall to water will cool you down.
Luna and Luan began their third round. Each of them were pulling each other. None of the sisters wanted to lose. In the end their rafts came close to each other much to their surprise. Luna slipped on her raft and walked on Luan's raft, accidentally kicking her raft away.
Luan: That's unexpected. What now?
Luna: [she pushed Luan by kicking her with her butt] Ugh!
Luan: [she saved herself from fall] That's tug of wet, not butt battle.
Luna: Change of plans. Too few space for tug of war. [she tried to kick Luan with her butt again]
Luan: [avoiding attack] Woah! If you want a butt battle then have it! [she kicked Luna with her butt] Prepare for your butt kicked.
Luna: Now we're talking!
Luna and Luan continued their butt battle. In the end they both dodged their attacks and fell to water.
Luna: Whoa! That was rocking awesome!
Luan: This time I agree with you, but I have enough of kicking your butt with my butt.
Luna: We can play a pool hop race on those small rafts. [she pointed]
Luan: Do you want me to get sea sick with so many rafts? [she left] I rather cheer children up.
Luna: [to the audience] Great. I'm alone now. It's so quiet and so boring now. There is no music coming from these speakers. I don't get how can people not get crazy with this silence. Huh? What's this?
Luna detected a small fountain. Suddenly Maggie approached the fountain too. Swimsuit of the emo girl looked like both top and bottom were dark blue skirts with purple belt. It turned out the fountain is a hydraulophone as Maggie began playing a sad melody on it like on piano. This interested Luna so she approached it.
Luna: Finally someone with sense of music! Nice playing.
Maggie: Interrupting is rude!
Luna: That was a compliment.
Maggie: I didn't ask for compliment. I just wanted to play my favorite melody.
Luna: Ok, but why so sad? Check this! [she played a rock melody on hydraulophone] Nice for my first try! Don't you think?
Maggie: All I think is that you're hogging hydraulophone from me and this is my least favorite kind of music.
Luna: Are you always such saddo?
Maggie: Not your business, boy!
Luna: I'm a girl!
Maggie: Really? Then why you have short hair, deep voice and such boyish shirt?
Luna: [annoyed] I'm 15 and still many mistake me for a boy.
Maggie: I'm 13, so...
Luna: You're only 13? You look like 15.
Maggie: So if I grow up fast, then I should be proud for being a more mature girl than you.
Luna: Hey! That's low!
Maggie: Sad, but real. Truth often hurts. Another truth is I play better than you.
Luna: That's enough! I challenge you to play on hydraulophone.
Maggie: Fine. My mom forces me to practice piano playing since I was 7. Finally all those lessons will have some use. [she played a sad and slow melody]
Luna: My turn! [she played a happy and dynamic melody] It seems audience likes my music.
Maggie: I don't play music to get an attention. Enough that boys keep looking at me because my body matured quickly.
Luna: If you like talking about drama, then now you'll face the music of drama.
Luna and Maggie kept competing on hydraulophone until a lifeguard grabbed their arms, stopping them.
Luna and Maggie: Hey! What's wrong with you?!
Lifeguard: Get out of the hydraulophone. You two cause a constant mood swing to the other swimmers.
Maggie: We just had a personal competition.
Lifeguard: You are hogging the hydraulophone from others. Take your boyfriend and leave!
Maggie: I don't have a boyfriend!
Luna: I'm not even a boy!
Lifeguard: Doesn't matter. Leave!
Both Maggie and Luna were pushed to water by the life guard. They had messed hair and were disappointed.
Maggie: Just great. The contest in unsettled.
Speaker: Attention! I invite you to aqua aerobic activity in the relax pool.
Luna: Did you hear it? Soon there will be aqua aerobic. There we can compete to prove who's better.
Maggie: Why do you think I'd enjoy loud dynamic music and a bunch of too happy people? I'm done with you.
Luna: Sheesh. Are all emo such complainers? Never mind. I'll enjoy it myself.
Maggie left Luna alone and returned to her mom, who was lying and sunbathing.
Maggie's mother: How was it, daughter? Did you meet new friends?
Maggie: No, just an annoying punk girl dressed as a boy.
Maggie's mother: Sit next to me and forget it.
Maggie: Mom, why am I supposed to wear this swimsuit? All boys keep looking at me.
Maggie's mother: Your pale skin needs good tanning. It's for your health.
Maggie: What's a point of tanning if it's not permanent?
Maggie's mother: Look at this girl in yellow [she pointed Luan]. She's making animals from pool noodles.
Maggie: So what? I don't like any of those animals.
Lifeguard: Hey! What are you doing with pool noodles?
Luan: The joggling got boring to the children, so I began making balloon animals. Or rather pool noodle animals. [giggle] Get it?
Lifeguard: Then no untie them or you'll be expelled.
Luan: Oh, man! All for nothing!
Maggie's mother: Poor girl. She had good intentions, but it turned against her.
Maggie: She's struggling with this. I don't know what's worse. Undoing her work or fact it's exhausting for her. Such drama is an entertainment I like.
Luna joined a crowd of people that came aqua aerobic. Among them she met Tabby in same swimsuit model as Luan but with British flag.
Luna: Tabby!
Tabby: Luna! [she approached Luna and they bumped their fists]
Luna: I'm glad that I'll perform aqua aerobic in a friendly company.
Tabby: More friends the better!
Luna: The music is turned on! Let's dance!
Tabby: Hey, isn't this one of your sisters?
Luna: Hey, sis! What's up?
Luan: Look at my hands! They are swollen.
Luna: I'm sorry.
Tabby: I usually dance to forget about pain. Hey! Join us in aqua aerobic.
Luan: But my hands!
Luna: There you will keep them in cold water. Dance with us!
Luan: Then let's dance!
Luna, Luan and Tabby and other people were performing aqua aerobic in the relax pool according to music.
--Chapter 6 - Lucy's story--
Lucy was walking around the water park, sighing out of boredom. She noticed few kids playing at kiddie pool, so she approached the,.
Lucy: Boo!
Kids: Aaaah! [the kids ran away]
Lucy: Sigh! It's so boring around here. Even scaring kids no longer gives me fun.
Rocky: [appearing behind Lucy] Hey! [he patted her arm]
Lucy: Aaah! [jumping out of fear] R-Rocky! What a surprise.
Rocky: Nice to see you too.
Lucy: I hope I can have at least fun with you, because this water park is so boring.
Rocky: What are you talking about? Did you try the highest slider?
Lucy: I did. I expected to have fun by thinking I'm going down so fast, but it didn't impress me.
Rocky: Really? You must have nerves of the best steel, because I and Rusty tried this and it was so frightening that we decided to do it again when we're adults.
Lucy: I was so bored I tried to think of a poem called "Boredom". [blushing] However with a company like you whole boredom is gone and so is my inspiration. [sadly] Sigh!
Rocky: I don't know how should I feel now. Oh, by the way, Rusty told me to look after you.
Lucy: [confused] Me? What does he want from me?
Rocky: [he grabbed Lucy's arm] Come with me and ask him yourself.
Rusty: [annoyed] Rocky! Who did you bring?!
Rocky: I brought Lucy as you told me to.
Rusty: That's Luna! I told you to bring Lucy, the sporty Lincoln's sister.
Lucy: [annoyed grabbed Rusty's hair and pulled his face to hers] Are you nuts?! I'm Lucy and the sister you look for is Lynn!
Rusty: Ok, but why are you so mad?
Lucy: Nobody ever dared to confuse me with Lynn!
Rocky: Lucy, take it easy! Even I have problem with remembering names of all your sisters.
Flat Tire and Papa Wheele: [approaching Rusty and sarcastically laughing]
Lucy: Tell me what's going on?
Rocky: Those two are giving us hard time. Rusty challenged them for a volleyball match. If he wins they leave him alone and if they win he's going to clean their bikes.
Lucy: What does it have to do with me? I still don't get it.
Rocky: He told me "Find Lucy Loud". However it seems he confused names. He probably wanted to win thanks to your sporty sister.
Lucy: Why don't you help him play against them?
Rocky: I am not good at volleyball.
Lucy: Wow. Then now he's doomed.
Flat Tire: So this is your partner against us?
Papa Wheele: After you left the bike gang you're getting dumb.
Rusty: Shut up!
Flat Tire: You can't even give a good riposte.
Rusty: Why do I always have to confuse their names?
Papa Wheele: You're a dimwit. Your only good decision was to leave the gang.
Rusty: I left you because I was smart enough to see your true colors. I realized you are jerks and I could become like you.
Flat Tire: You mocked Lincoln for pink girly bike like we. Don't paint yourself better than us!
Rusty: I was a fool, but I realized it. We kept insulting those who don't have cool bikes and when you decided to destroy them with graffiti that was too far for me. I am not saint, but I don't want to be like that either.
Papa Wheele: That no longer matters. Are you going to play volleyball with us or not? If you pick walkover then you can start washing our bikes.
Rusty: Oh man!
Rocky: I'm sorry, I can help you with this.
Flat Tire: It will be nice to see a dimwit and his miniature washing our bikes!
Lucy: That's enough! I can't stand jerks like you!
Rocky: Lucy, what are you doing?
Lucy: I will play on Rusty's side against you!
Papa Wheele: Just because you're pale you don't scare me.
Flat Tire: Get ready for your humiliating lose.
Rusty: Are you serious? Why are you helping me?
Lucy: You're Rocky's brother and besides such jerks like them get on my nerves!
Rocky: That's nice of you, but do you know how to play volleyball?
Lucy: Don't worry. I have a helpful strategy. [she whispered to Rusty's ear]
Rusty: [insidious smile] Hm.
Rusty started the play by putting ball in motion. Flat Tire hit the ball towards Lucy, but Rusty blocked it and hit towards Papa Wheele. Due to his weight he didn't move fast enough to catch the ball what resulted in Rusty getting a point. Later Flat Tire put ball in motion towards Lucy. She dived under water, so Rusty could stand on her shoulders and hit the ball much to surprise of his opponents and got another point. Suddenly Carol was walking nearby. Her attractive body took Rusty's attention and distracted him from play. Flat Tire used this to get a point. He used same trick when Rusty got distracted by beauty of another young woman, Dana. Lucy slapped Rusty in face.
Lucy: What are you doing?! Do you want to lose?!
Rusty: What?! Are we losing? How?!
Lucy: You behaved like you weren't paying attention to the play. It happened twice!
Rusty: All started when I saw a pretty lady.
Lucy: Grrr. Boys and their hormones! Stop looking at girls and focus on the ball.
Rusty: You're right. Rocky!
Rocky: What?
Rusty: [whispering to Rocky's ear] Make sure no pretty girl comes here.
Rocky: Alright. I'll do my best.
In the final stand Rusty tricked his opponents to think he's going to hit the ball on left. When they went on left, he quickly hit the ball on the right, where area was not defended at all. He get the third point and won.
Rusty: Yeah! Victory! Luna, high five! [he tried to hit high five]
Lucy: [she dodged Rusty]
Rusty: Woah! [he fell to water] What's that for?
Lucy: For forgetting my name! Look on my mouth. My name is Lu-cy!
Rusty: Ok, Thank you for help Lucy! [looking at Flat Tire and Papa Wheele] You two lost! Out!
Flat Tire and Papa Wheele left the pool.
Papa Wheele: Meh. There are other more interesting pools.
Rocky: Did I miss the end? Who won?
Rusty: Me and Lucy.
Rocky: High Five, Bro! [he jumped to pool and hit high five to Rusty]
Rusty: Did you have doubts in your big bro?
Rocky: No. What did Lucy tell you?
Lucy: Lynn, my roommate can't shut up about telling how she won her plays. She described some tricks. I am surprised I remembered them.
Rusty: You are amazing, Lucy. I will remember your name.
Rocky: So what are we going to do now?
Lucy: With you two everything is more interesting to me. Just please don't get too cheerful.
--Chapter 7 - Family meeting--
Lincoln, all of his older sisters and 4 of his younger sisters gathered at pool bar. Leni was carrying Lola, Luna and Luan were holding each others in order to support their walk, rest of the siblings were walking independently. They gathered around a table took their seats. Some of them didn't have seats for themselves so they took them from other tables much to annoyance of other patrons.
Lori: I took part in a Hawaii dance contest, which turned out to be fake.
Luan: Fake dance contest? I need to note this. But where? Now I can note this only on my swimsuit. [giggle]
Lola: Don't even think about it! Nobody makes fool of Lola Loud!
Luan: On the second thought.
Lori: Later I had a bubble bath in company of my friends Dana and Becky. [sigh] That was so relaxing.
Luna: I played on hydrualophone. This was my very first time. It's similar to piano, but quite different. I also met my friend, Tabby. We both took part in aqua aerobic.
Luan: Don't forget about me. I also participated.
Lynn: Meh, that's nothing compare to all sliders I and my bro experienced. So much adrenaline.
Lincoln: Listen. We don't have much time left. Let's have some fun together.
Lucy: Right having fun together is much better than alone. I know what I'm talking about.
Lincoln: May this be a slow fun, because I'm tired.
Lana: Hey, did anybody ride on dolphin?
Leni: Dolphins? Where? I don't hear their squeaks.
Lisa: Of course not! Those aquatic mammals won't let humans ride on them.
Lana: I meant those inflatable ones. [she pointed a pool with inflatable dolphins]
Leni: I thought dolphins are water creatures, not air creatures. Can they also fly? That would mean they are flying fish.
Lisa: [facepalm] Leni, those are not true dolphins, but inflatable toys in shape of dolphins. Besides the real dolphins aren't fish, but mammals.
Luan: Just come there.
Lynn: Dang it! All those people hogged all vacant ones!
Lucy: Don't worry, leave it to me. BOO!
All people in the pool got scared except for few kids.
Lucy: I don't it. It always worked.
Lincoln: My turn. Let me take this, Luan. [he removed Luan's scrunchie and covered it with ground from a palm pot]
Luan: [annoyed] Hey!
Lincoln: I'll buy you a new one. [he threw it to pool] Eww! What's this?!
The remaining people in the pool mistook the dirty scrunchie for something disgusting and ran away in panic.
Lola: Ha! Now it's ours! I am the queen of dolphins!
Luan: [taking her scrunchie] It's so dirty!
Lana: Then give it to me.
Luan: [sarcastically] Thanks, Lincoln!
Leni: You look better with loose hair.
Lincoln: I told you I'll buy you a new one.
Lincoln and his 9 sisters took inflatable dolphins. Some of them were in pairs on one dolphin. All had fun until a speaker made a signal.
Speaker: Loud Family Out!
All sisters looked angry at Lincoln and he was confused and annoyed. All Louds gathered.
Lola: This is your fault, Linky!
Lincoln: Why am I always blamed?!
Luan: My scrunchie!
Rita: Kids! You did nothing wrong. Simply the time is up.
Lola: I'm sorry for blaming you. Force of habit.
Lincoln: [looking at a shop] Wait a minute. [he came to the shop and purchased a yellow scrunchie] Here it is, Luan.
Luan: Thanks, little bro. [she patted his head]
Leni: I had so much fun with whole this relax.
Lisa: To me the best were exotic fish in aquarium.
Lana: The most interesting were abyssal fish, like sea monsters.
Lucy: Sigh! I missed sea monsters.
Lynn: Can't you buy more time for us? I had too much fun to leave now.
Lynn Sr: Sorry, Lynn Jr. We had money only for one visit. Even a for a small family a visit in the water park very expensive.
Lynn: Dang it!
All Louds returned home.
--Epilogue--
Next day Loud siblings were at Lori's room debating what to do next day.
Lori: Any suggestions?
Leni: Let's go to the water park again.
Lori: Leni, don't you remember we don't have enough money?
Leni: Oh.
Lana: We don't need to pay for visiting a humid swamp.
Lola: Eww! Go there yourself.
Lisa: Thanks to the heat any swamp is as dry as a bone.
Lana: Dang it! That means all frogs and lizards are gone.
Luan: Let's use our pool. Ah yes. I forgot it's damaged.
Lincoln: Wait. We can have fun in water gun battle.
Lori: Ok, who is for water gun battle? [she sees all hands up] All of you? Who is against? Nobody? Then it's decided. [she banged shoe on Leni's sewing table like a gavel].
Next day Lincoln, his older sisters and 4 younger sisters gathered at their backyard armed in water guns. All were wearing swimsuits. They were in pairs.
Lori: All teams present themselves!
Lori and Lola: Team Beauty!
Lana and Lynn: Team Strong!
Luan and Leni: Team Funny!
Lisa and Lucy: Team Mystery!
Luna and Lincoln: Team SMOOCH!
Luan: Team SMOOCH? Seriously?
Luna: That's the only thing we two have in common.
Lincoln: Better than my idea, Team Bro and Sis.
Lola: Can we start splashing each other?! It's getting hotter!
Lincoln: Then lets start the battle and spare no ammo!
All siblings began splashing each others with water guns, what helped them forget about the heat. After this fight they were all wet but clearly had fun. Lincoln looked around.
Lincoln: Guys! Look. Whole backyard is muddy.
Lola: Eww! I'm out of here. [she left] Oh man! What a messy place.
Lana: Exactly what's perfect for me! [she jumped into mud]
Lisa: I'll take this mud sample. I will examine its state of contaminations. [she left]
Lynn: [excited] That's a perfect place for mud wrestling.
Luan: [she discreetly pulled Lynn's pants and threw mud there] Or butt shaking. [giggle]
Lynn: Aaaah! [she moved chaotically like she was performing a wild dance] Luan! You're going to pay for this! [she lunged at Luan]
Luan: Are you mad or mud? [giggle] Get it?
Lana noticed Lucy is building a vampire castle from mud and she joined her by building her own castle. Leni was making mud mask.
Luna: Look how rockers slide! Yahoo! [she performed sliding on her knees, getting muddy] Rock N Roll!
Lincoln: Impressive! [he performed sliding on his stomach] Yay! [some mud got into his mouth] Bleh! Bleh! [he began coughing]
Luna: What's up, bro?! [worried] Oh, no! Hold still, bro! [she grabbed him from behind and began making him spit the mud from his mouth]
Lincoln: Bleh! Gross! Even Aunt Ruth's pudding is tastier.
Luna: Are you alright, dude?
Lincoln: My throat hurts a bit and now I know how ground tastes. Thank you, Luna.
Luna: What kind of sis would I be if I let you get choked by mud?
Lincoln: Oh, Luna. [he hugged Luna and got hug back from her]
Lori: I'm wet and dirty, I need a shower. [she turned back and got hit by mud ball] Ugh! Who did this? Nobody wants to admit? Then it literally means war.
Lori started a battle in mud with her siblings, but all seemed to have fun. Suddenly it started raining, so the siblings ran to their house.
Lori: I don't need shower anymore, rain litterally cleaned me already.
Lincoln: I guess we can still have fun at home.
THE END
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Since "L is for Love" he's Leni's love interest, that's why he's mentioned. If you don't like him, then be glad he didn't make physical appearance and be happy with rest of the story.
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Don’t worry, now i’m Glad that at least he didn’t make a physical appearance
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This would totally make a really good Loud House episode, especially after I saw how Terrible the newest Loud House episode "Tripped" was out on Amazon before it could air on Nickelodeon.
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I thought the episode was kind of funny. What didn't you like it?
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For my ratings recap, "Tripped" was absolutely Terrible.
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Because this was all just the same ol' damn gags over and over again, plus terrible ideas for funny scenes.
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Ah; your next fanfic.
But what have you changed here?
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