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Fivey — Spinel Pagedoll
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Published: 2019-10-04 18:32:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 16716; Favourites: 1059; Downloads: 0
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YEEEES. They have finally fixed preview bug <3 I am so happy right now ;--; As soon as next month starts I am going to start working on more pagedolls like this. I have so many ideas!
If they only fix custom boxes I will be 100% happy with the site
Sorry for uploading same thing again! But without preview very few people was even able to see my work ;-;
But if you are here again catch a bonus. Here is extra version of this animation:
<img src="images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca8877… " /> This one has outline
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Hello, hello! I am Vehxx and will be critiquing your art today! I will be looking in and out of depth within your creation. Minor and Major details will be notified!
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[What can be seen:]
(Major aspects)
- The shading is consistent when the art moves.
- The background gives an ominous and uneasy feeling. Perfectly matches Spinel’s uncontrolled personality. Excellent work!
- The animation mimics Spinel’s “cartoonish” style.
- Excellent choice for the colors of the shaded portions. Gives the viewer a detail to admire!
- The injector is well drawn with its shade. Easily reminds the viewer that it is 3D.
- The face of Spinel adds in to the ominous onset of the animation.
- The smile of Spinel... Can it be happiness? Anger? Sadness? Or perhaps it’s a smile with a thirst of vengeance. Many emotions is depicted here. Outstanding job!
- That feeling of patients on Spinel, with the rejuvenator and side movements of her hips, strikes fear into the viewer.
- Spinel having her left hand out tells the viewer, “Give your life to me.”. Truly indicates a relevance of the Grim Reaper! Very cool!
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(Minor aspects)
- The haïr and feet move in sync with the motion of the body.
- The lines on the tubes, that connects the injectors legs, gives a well design to its tube-like structure!
- The haïr itself holds more than bunches. This adds in a beautiful design to Spinel!
- The rejuvenator bobs up and down as Spinel moves!
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[What you know, but can be improved:]
- Although it appears that the top of the injector is the main light source for the casting of Spinel’s shading, it can be easily missed and make the viewer confused to know where the light source is coming from.
- Gelatinous shoulder pads. I love jello! Who doesn’t?
- The main feature of the injector is missing its spike. No worries, everyone makes a mistake!
- Spinel’s gem can have extra detail to indicate it to be a gem instead of the clothing’s design.
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That’s all I have for you! Hope you have a great day and hope for the best of wishes to You and Your art creations!
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Omggg thats just a perfect pagedoll of spinel omggg ;;w;;
She looks so cool owo And the animation is just sooo smooth owo
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Awww. Thank you so muuuch!!!!
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This is incredible! I love how smooth the movement is and the colors ;__; well done!
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omg, this is awesomely perfect - just take out the background and make the sprite part of an rpg fight scene
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Ngl I'm always blown away by the smooth animation you always provide asdf
this looks so nice and smooth, really good work!
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I've had the issue too now with bigger animations D: it's driving me nuts. I HOPE it's a bug, but I haven't looked into it or talked to DA directly
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Ever since eclipse started this site is going nuts
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Yeah, it's a shame. I do understand the bugs though, since my hubby works with programming and coding and stuff, so I hope it's something they will address and fix. I wonder how much longer the normal DA design has before everyone is forced into Eclipse :I
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If it switches I am escaping XD
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Aw really? ;o; I think it'll be jarring to get used to, but the last time I looked at it, it seemed like they were adding a lot of normal stuff like custom widgets and such that we have now. It would be sad to not see you on here anymore ;-;
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If they fix the worst things I will still be here XD
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Yay ;v; I like your art too much for it to go away! >:I
It seems like they are adding a lot of features we all enjoy and are trying to make it the best it can be, but it's a gradual thing ;o;
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I will probably lurk around and drop something from time to time, but I will simply switch my "main base" XD
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Great job on the animation!^^
This looks Amazing 😍🙌
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