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historicpencil [2009-02-17 18:57:27 +0000 UTC]
Amazing pencil work. incredible
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Circes-Tree [2008-09-18 01:25:07 +0000 UTC]
yes!!! I love books! He def has his priorities straight and this illustrates something I am going to encounter soon, where can I put all my books?!?
Aside from the factor that I relate to and love this image, technically it seems to be well done too. Though I don't do this as often in my own drawing (though I enjoy the effect ) I really like the non-outline. the use of form, contour, light and shadow to create the edge of things. I am just a fan of how it makes the shape much more solid and it is how we really see things if you stop and think about it because even though we register the edge of things and a border or line it is actually form. I very much like the treatment of his hair for the same reason.
You have a good variety of darks and lights and textures.
The only portions I am not quite convinced by is his foot resting on the ground. That still feels a bit like it is floating to me and the other pages of the book because they still feel a little too much like a block that is self supporting although that does contrast nicely in that I can tell he is on the last page of the book.
I especially like the weight involved i the crossed knees however.
did you do this from a photo? I am guessing so only because it seems like such a specific moment and in a sense the composition feels photographic.
thanks for sharing the image. Nice work.
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fizzfoam In reply to Circes-Tree [2008-09-22 01:47:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the wonderful analysis! I agree that the foot and the book are not quite right. This was drawn from a photo taken by a tourist in Paris, so the man really does exist, and this scene is a wonderful capture of a moment in his life.
The original photo encompassed more of the surroundings; I cropped it to concentrate on the man and the book just a little bit more.
Shading and shape are important to me as I draw and I love the effects that result when it works out well. In fact, I am a very bad line-drawer, but seem to have a knack for the shading.
This piece has a particularly personal meaning to me as well; it reminds me strongly of my super-literate uncle who taught me to love books and learning. He gave up his career in teaching because he could no longer tolerate the mindlessness of the bureaucracy in the public schools where he taught. He spent his working life thereafter as a shipping and receiving laborer in a company that specialized in childrens' books. He lived simply, wore second-hand clothes, and walked everywhere rather than drive. The last part of his life he spent as the librarian in a home for war veterans; never married, no children. But I believe I and my seven brothers and sisters were his children, and so were all his other nieces and nephews, in some ways. He worked mundanely for his daily bread, but he really never stopped teaching; that was his true avocation. He was the eldest and his brother, my father, was the youngest of five children in their generation. I miss them both.
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Circes-Tree In reply to fizzfoam [2008-09-22 02:11:46 +0000 UTC]
thank you for sharing the beautiful memory. keep sharing you wonderful work!
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fizzfoam In reply to Thelma1 [2008-01-12 22:44:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Thelma. This is my watershed drawing, the one where I realized I really was able to do this drawing stuff, to a finer degree. I love this drawing!
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tiger-croc [2007-12-17 05:49:40 +0000 UTC]
This is so very tight and loose at the same time. Awesome work here!
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OhNari [2007-07-18 17:59:04 +0000 UTC]
what a great image! an aplause for you mate
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LittleOutrage [2007-07-14 16:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I was drawn to your site with those funky cups and so pleased with your gallery. This is fantastic... you've got the shading exactly right for this fellow to pop out expressively at us. Wonderful realism with great focus and details.
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fizzfoam In reply to LittleOutrage [2007-07-16 01:39:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! This was the first time I shocked myself, as I learned to draw; I had no idea I could ever do this sort of thing. I still don't believe, when I start a new drawing, that it will ever amount to anything. Then, somehow, eventually it's done, and I have to wonder, all over again, "where did THAT come from?!" It isn't drawn consciously, it's a gift and it's magic, and I'm always amazed!
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WattsHanna [2007-06-21 17:10:10 +0000 UTC]
this is an excelent piece!
its show you skillful!
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WattsHanna [2007-06-21 17:09:33 +0000 UTC]
this is an excelent piece!
its show you skillful!
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fizzfoam In reply to sherryetal [2007-05-15 21:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I was very lucky to have this photo to work with, I'd like to meet that guy!
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illfedchildren [2007-03-16 02:49:26 +0000 UTC]
your work is inspiring..damn that's good stuff!!
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fizzfoam In reply to Linz-Leigh [2006-08-09 22:57:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the nice words!
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fizzfoam In reply to KarenC [2006-02-11 21:21:05 +0000 UTC]
Karen! Karen Karen Karen, how are you?! Thanks for your wonderful comments! This drawing is a leap forward for me, it was the most detailed, by far, that I had ever attempted. Also the first with a detailed background.
It is drawn from a ref photo that was cropped to frame this scene. Was I there? Perhaps. The bag contains words in French, and I visited France many years before this was drawn, so I like to think it is Paris, and that I may have walked down this very street, once upon a time.
It contains a lot of feeling, however, because he reminds me strongly of my favorite uncle, who was very eccentric - highly educated, a teacher by profession, a voracious reader, deeply intellectual. Yet he worked most of his life on a factory shipping dock, rather than as a teacher, because of his frustration with the bureaucratic education system. He had no patience whatsoever for shallow minds or ignorance. Certainly, he was mis-placed in America... He cared not at all for material success, but loved music and literature. The old coat, the wild hair, the love of books, this could easily be my uncle in this picture. So was I there? Yes, most certainly, in some ways, I was there. I had never thought it through this way until you asked!
I am glad to meet you, and I hope you will post more work; certainly, you must have more; you are obviously not a beginner!
Thanks, take care, talk to ya later,
Mick
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make-love-not-war [2006-02-01 23:19:38 +0000 UTC]
amazing, absolutely amazing.
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00adam [2006-01-25 02:24:06 +0000 UTC]
really really awsome! brilliant detail and shading.
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remzisan [2006-01-24 13:10:03 +0000 UTC]
Really good job
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