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Published: 2003-11-27 23:32:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 13422; Favourites: 335; Downloads: 116
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Standing on my roofWind blowing in my hair
All alone was I
Because of my who I'd come to be
Others only stared
Then it began to storm
Salt tears on fresh rain
I fell off my roof
Sure soon to feel more pain
You caught me without harm
Even in the awful beating
Of the thundering rain
All the tourment of lonelyness
And all my inside pain
Your my sheild and Coat of Arms
My flag to show the way
After all the awful things I said
Even closer now you stay
And my heart this Rooftop Storm tonight
Forever will be warmed
By a fire I'll never let fade
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CRAZYasmyart
CREAZYLIKE MY ART-superb art-pls.join my group and our CONTEST-Thanks in advance-kay
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Wow.....just wow.....
I wish I could write like tht. Can u give me feedback on some things I've wrote so far? I feel like u could teach me so much,
Just wow.....
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-slowly claps- I literally saw the poem and that my friend is impressive
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wow absolutely beautiful! i can really relate and Ilike your style. I'mnew and want to start loading up my poems. i have a lot i want to share. how do you do it though? I tried but then it keeps on saying that i need a preview picture. but other poems don't seem to need one and i even tried doing something stupid like that. for it it's about the words. please help if you can! Again I really love your writing. hopefully u be able to see if u can relate to mine
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soooo beautiful.....you put a lot of expression into this
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i feel u all. deep thinkers, thats wat we are. why cant the world acsept that?
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that was really good and i would know i write poetry for real
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Oops I forgot to write how I thought about this. Ok, so, you are talking about a person that you so horribly scarred, and they help you out, even after what you had done? If so, that is so beautiful, it puts a tear in my eye... *sniffle* i love it, even if that is not what you were talking about. It is a beautiful poem, and I thank you for sharing it with the people of dA and the ones that visit. I hope I got all of this all right, and I love the poem!
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Um does deviantart do that by itself or do i have to do something? cuz i got a story i wanna put up a story
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you submit it as art and put it under litrature i had the same problome
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u r welcome^^ glad i could help
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oopsi said story up twice
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BEAUTIFUL! I hope you don't mind me sharing this in my Poetry Club!
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*sniff* *sniff* its so sad but yet romantic, i could just imagine the catch as she falls into the arms of his...ahh so great *sniff* *clap* clap* great job! great job!
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wow, your pretty good.
oh um loneliness is spelled wrong
Fav Dev: Funky-Chick (check her stories and poems out)
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Hey, how can you submit poems? I was trying to do it myself but it only excepted the cover picture... -_- can someone please help?
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if you like this, search
Funky-Chick
she is really good- very emotional
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