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Published: 2008-06-14 19:52:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description BOOM!

What was that?

Shit. This is very, very bad. The only time things go boom around here is when Max is cooking (which she can’t be, obviously) and when Iggy is testing something. Great.

Help Max, check out booming.  Help Max, check out booming.  Help Max, check out booming.  Help Max, check out boom-

BOOM!

Check out booming. Yeah, let’s go with that.   

BOOM!
BOOM!
BOOM!

Three more right in a row. This is bad, very bad. Either Iggy is insane, or we are under attack by a foreign military. Maybe it’s the French.

I feel like kicking some French ass right now.

I run out back to find *sigh* we are not under attack by the French, but rather by yet another army of Iggy booms. Big ones, the size of my head and even larger.

“Iggy, what the hell are you doing?”

“Blowing stuff up. What does it look like?”

“Just what are you trying to blow up?”

“This stuff,” He said, gesturing to the pile of stuff. I saw old tires, milk cartons, tee-shirts, everything in the pile consisting of a huge Itex logo. I get it now.

“Whatever.” I said. Now on to Max.
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Comments: 8

Seraphya [2009-01-15 03:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Err... I have an idea of the next, if you really want to /try/ to continue this. If Fang left Max like in the forest you could get Fang to see if she's not eaten by something,then spot some type of assasin person kidnapping her, and the assasin has wings! XD (just a thought)
Anyways, great job!~
Dun end it, I ran out of stuff to read D=

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flaminspider In reply to Seraphya [2009-01-15 12:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, both for the comment and the advice. I've been out of ideas lately, so i might try to pick this one up a little.

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skywalk21 [2008-06-23 19:58:21 +0000 UTC]

kool story

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maximumridelover [2008-06-14 22:19:15 +0000 UTC]

that's good...first one was better, but it was still good.

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flaminspider In reply to maximumridelover [2008-06-15 01:42:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks. the boom thing was more of a transition than anything else. the next part will be better, i promise.

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maximumridelover In reply to flaminspider [2008-06-15 19:47:53 +0000 UTC]

i figured...but it was still good

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flaminspider In reply to maximumridelover [2008-06-15 20:26:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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maximumridelover In reply to flaminspider [2008-06-15 20:39:06 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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