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Published: 2011-09-23 12:03:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 556; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 4
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For ^^(Sorry, the lineart on my paint program went wrong, so I had to take longer coloring it in manually DX)
Hope you enjoy it ^^
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you're welcome ^^
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Sure, I would like them, but I don't have premium. >.<
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Alright I'ma critique then o:
I'll start with the cons. I hope I'm not too mean.. ;u;
- The neck is too big (at least for me). Maybe you can make your future necks skinnier?
- The tail and ear rings bother me... I feel that they're too high up. I think you should put the rings in the center of the tail/ear.
- I don't like the shading on the nose; it looks weird.. >< Maybe you should blur it more... Or don't add a shadow for the nose.
Time for ze pros~
- I like your simple bg~ Especially the grass 83
- I love how you made the rings glow! Glowing enhances the pic c:
- I like the eyes :3
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Yes, so I'm done with my critique~ xD
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XD It's alright. I say the cons would actually help with my improvement! For the neck, I thought so too, but I had problems with the program so I couldn't change the lineart. DX For the rings, really? Because I thought that it was that high. (DX I guess I should look at pictures when I'm drawing) For the shading of the nose, I can see what ur talking about. The angle of light would not create of shadow like that. *facepalms*
I think the rating is too generous! XDDD
(P.S. I made this in 30 minutes, my older pic like this which took me more than 4 hours to make looks much better XD) [link]
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I hope I wasn't too harsh.. xD But I'm glad I was able to help you~ :3
This pic is actually good for 30 min xD I probably would've done a bad job in 30 min lol.
I shall look :3
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Nah, not even close to harsh. It was helpful though. ^^
And thank you for the critiq ^^
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this is amazing it's just beautiful X3 thank you so much
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^^ Thank you! I hope you like it!
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