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Published: 2010-10-28 17:35:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 230; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 3
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Stars dance in your eyes, it's alright,I know you're mine, let go tonight,
Goodbye inhibitions, we all die someday,
Drop down from the clouds, angels pray,
Show me promise, make me your girl,
Rearrange the sky, shine across the world,
Leave a white rose, if you still love me,
If the morning comes, and you're going crazy,
If I'm still around when you close your eyes,
The dream came real, every feeling alive,
Hold onto that thought, if it wasn't fake,
If this isn't lust, you know what's at stake,
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Comments: 12
This is beautiful. the words flow really well. <3
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Brilliantly sweet, I love it! The last line too oh, "if this isn't lust you know what's at stake." Very beautiful, and wonderfully written. The purity in a censored act is not one you normally see, but I like it, love it!
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Thank you so much ! That really means a lot to me
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^_^ you're welcome!
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Thanks, I'm glad someone likes it, I find writing barely gets any recognition .
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do you write for recognition from others or for yourself ?
I'm not as familiar with writing poetry as I am reading it, but perhaps I will try my hand at something new. I do like to write all the time, I will just have to look stupid for a bit and ask a few questions every now and then if you don't mind.
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I am not sure anymore, to be honest, maybe both. It's something that I sort of got out of, unfortunately.
I am looking forward to seeing what you produce, and I don't mind questions at all.
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hehe and i likr the title
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