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barefoot-mistress [2007-03-30 16:59:18 +0000 UTC]
Wow, for not writing a poem in two years...that was amaising. This oem reminds me of something, can you guess what?
but id like to know what it means to you.
<3
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Fleecircusbum In reply to barefoot-mistress [2007-03-31 04:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I should probably try writing more stuff, huh?
I don't know, sweety; what does this poem remind you of?
This poem is like a detailed picture to me that describes a very fucked up relationship I once had with someone. Every word is like another line drawn on the picture. I am glad you like it though.
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barefoot-mistress In reply to Fleecircusbum [2007-04-10 16:50:19 +0000 UTC]
To me it all comes down to me and you. But i guess i was terribly off course. I always think of you and I just lying there staring into each other's eyes..covered in sweat and kissing. And the items on your bed just end up everywhere else, I guess I just..i don't know. Continue to write such good poems though, i'd like 2 read some new stuff.
I heart you...
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silvertyphoon7 [2007-03-22 09:53:53 +0000 UTC]
i remember that picture, and i like the poem.
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