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Published: 2012-02-11 15:31:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 200; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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A beginning, broken.A game of lies
Distorted by reality
Burning.
A city torn,
Like flutters of paper
Died red
Staining the pages
Of unwritten song.
Smoke of a pitiful white
Glazes out truth
In a broken promise.
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Comments: 5
Wow, this is really good! It has a brilliant message, and the imagery is amazing. Though one thing I didn't get, on the seventh line, do you mean "died red" or "dyed red?" Anyways, great poem! Bravo!
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It's kinda play on words :3 Thank you so much~~~
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Really?? That makes it even more awesome!
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Hehehe :3 See what I did there? huh?
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