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ilubatar [2021-08-19 16:37:25 +0000 UTC]
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TwinBird [2016-02-19 04:16:56 +0000 UTC]
What just happened?
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FloofyFoxComics In reply to TwinBird [2016-02-19 05:04:36 +0000 UTC]
Quite a lot. Mostly time passing. What is it you're confused about?
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FloofyFoxComics In reply to TwinBird [2016-02-19 21:59:14 +0000 UTC]
That's fine, I honestly don't feel like I'm telling this story clear enough anyway.
And I've got a journal here
Guys, I need your honest opinions here.Hey guys, I'm here to ask you guys something.
I want your opinions on my stories. Specifically Darkness's backstory. I want you guys to give me your thoughts and opinions on this backstory specifically. The reason for this is because I feel like the story currently is not as good as it could be, and I want to make it as great as the other backstories. I know where I want to go with this story, but I'm not sure if the way I'm telling it is conveying that clearly to you guys. That's why I'm doing this.
So here's what I want form you guys, I want you to tell me what it is specifically that you like or dislike about Darkness's backstory so far. I don't want "I like the story overall" or "I hate this story, it sucks!". I want you to tell me specifically, give me details. Why do you like or dislike that part. And be honest please, don't sugarcoat it if there's something you genuinely don't like. But also give me a reason why. where I'm asking for people to tell me what it is they like or don't like about this story to help me tell it better. If you want you can say what it is specifically that's confusing you about this. I'd love to hear that so I can work on making this story as good as it can be.
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GolliatTaillog [2016-02-19 03:14:24 +0000 UTC]
Nice. I'm intrigued.
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FloofyFoxComics In reply to GolliatTaillog [2016-02-19 05:05:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^ I'm hoping you guys will get even more intrigued as Darkness's story progresses.
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Dar-K-dA [2016-02-18 15:56:38 +0000 UTC]
Ah must say, this is pretty great.
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FloofyFoxComics In reply to Dar-K-dA [2016-02-18 16:36:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, its going to (hopefully) get better as time goes on.
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