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rainbow000pegasus [2016-01-17 16:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm from ProjectComment ! I'm here to bring you a critique!

First of all, I like how you shaded the blue blouse-skirt part. You paid a lot of attention to the loose blue fabric and it has a lot of folds. I also like how you coloured her eyes, glassy, but orb-like. I'm pretty sure you tweaked the hair shape, I like that shape there.

However, I would need to say her hair (pinks) are quite neon and were pastel-like in the movie, but it might be just of your liking of colours. Her left hand looks very stiff- it creates a feeling of stiffness of her pose. I think the blending of pink-blue for her hair's OK, but it seems like there are stray pin streaks on her blue side of hair.

Alright, thank you, have a nice day.

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Eineko [2016-01-17 00:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I love Steven Universe, and this was an amazing episode for sure! Cotton Candy Garnet is really cute and you portrayed her really nicely here too!

Things I like!

The pose, I can see what you were going for here, and I know that if you changed the hands to not be so stiff that you would have pulled it off perfectly. I will tell you below how I can help you with posing!
Colour choice, very pretty!
You really caught their surprise and personalities together in this portrait!

How things could improve:

- Some of the colours here may not be the correct choices, but a bit of studying of colour theory, such as searching for some color theory tutorials on deviantart will help a lot! They helped me!
- Have you heard of a program called DesignDoll? It's free! What it is, is basically you can use a 3d model and pose them however you want, you can even change how they look! It should help a lot with studying anatomy and proper posing. It even has a light source option!
- I feel that the eyes could be made more prominent, perhaps with a bit more contrast (darker lashes?).
- The blending of the hair is a wee bit awkward. Sadly, I don't have much experience with afros myself, or coarse hair at all to be honest, so I can't be much help in advice on how to make it look better. Perhaps not so much blending? Or more careful blending?

Anywhoo, this looks great, and I wish you luck in your conquest of art! Beautiful stuff my friend!

  

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YagiMatsu [2016-01-16 15:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness! This looks so beautiful > U < Amazing job!

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Ambersbroer [2016-01-16 14:46:41 +0000 UTC]

Looks really cool!

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kyrawriter [2016-01-16 13:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Interesting

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SWEET-MAYHEM [2016-01-16 04:52:03 +0000 UTC]

I really like the way you drew her hair! The way the colors blend into each other are really smooth, and the texture in her shirt are well done. I like how you shaded the lines on it! I also really like her straight posture, and her facial expression is very clear to read. The nose looks a little big on the left side, but other than that, everything looks great! I think you could adjust the nose a little bit to make it look more angled straight. Overall, it really looks like you put a lot of effort into drawing Garnet, keep up the good work!

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Luz-Vi-Minda [2016-01-16 02:51:01 +0000 UTC]

This is very well done. I like it

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KaidokJ [2016-01-16 02:13:25 +0000 UTC]

This actually really nice. The color scheme works well and I really like how you did the hair, it has a strong sense of volume and texture.
Structure wise, things look pretty good, although the hips might be a touch. The only thing that looks a little strange is the right hand, it kind of looks like she has 5 fingers, instead of 4 fingers and a thumb. But I know what you were going for, so it isn't a big deal. Overall, really nice work.

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