Koal [2004-10-17 01:35:57 +0000 UTC]
I found the opening line: There’s an ocean falling from the sky. And I’m going to swim in it. Very powerful, but everything else after it just didn't live up to it.
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baseballmidget [2004-08-13 02:45:18 +0000 UTC]
that's really good. A very original description of rain. And kinda funny too
whispersfrombelow [2004-07-20 18:06:04 +0000 UTC]
thats good! it's pouring rain over here too very well described
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Flyingthroughwater In reply to whispersfrombelow [2004-07-20 20:10:12 +0000 UTC]
thank you both
D-Monix [2004-07-20 17:30:04 +0000 UTC]
wow that's really good, i like it