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Yeehaapix [2012-11-17 10:24:33 +0000 UTC]

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This is a very clever shot. Well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>

Vision: 5/5 very well-composed, subject in the centre, and an interesting angle. It's as if they're standing on a hill, if I'm correct?

Originality: 5/5 I don't think I've seen many shots like this!

Technique: 3/5 I see you used a 5D e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Eek)"/> Wish I had that camera!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I'd just like to say that it looks like you over-used your flash. It looks like you used an external flash, if I'm right (correct me if I'm wring!!). I only gave you 3/5 because the picture came out very washed out. You can see on their faces, the skin is very pale and slightly indistinguishable. This is probably because you aimed the flash straight at them. Try using interesting angles. For this shot I would've aimed the flash slightly higher than where your subject is to prevent the washout that has occurred. Also, try to invest if you can in Lightroom, or similar software. It helps a lot - look up a few tutorials on YouTube, and you'll be good to go e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I use it all the time, and in a shot like this, it would help a lot because there is an effect called recovery. It takes away a lot of any washout that has occurred in an image. Then you'll get thos awesome skin tones I think you were looking for e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Impact 4.5/5 Like i said, unusual angle, very nicely done.

I hope this helped you, and keep it up! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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fogke In reply to Yeehaapix [2012-11-17 10:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Hi, many thanks for these words I am glad you like it.

Yes it is hill anf straight front flash, yes it is external one, but it is my target, make it raw, washed out, old, amateur... becouse it should be non prepared look of the photo, like I am the hunter in forest with just normal camera flash.. but yes I tried different angles too, for example here: [link] but I dont like it, it is too dramatic like from theater...

colors and everything is done by photoshop, I do not need any tutorial, I am photoshop expert(I hope so, because I study it and it is my job, too ) I dont want look as selfish person, just I am trying explain, that this look is for me my purpose.

but still thanks !

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Yeehaapix In reply to fogke [2012-11-17 13:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Sorry, I get it Sorry if I offended you

Still loving the pics though!

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fogke In reply to Yeehaapix [2012-11-18 15:45:28 +0000 UTC]

no no, it is ok I am glad for your opinion
thank you

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Artmguy [2012-12-07 12:29:25 +0000 UTC]

vic a vic mi v hlave roste pribeh stojici uvnitr te fotky. dobre je to.

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fogke In reply to Artmguy [2012-12-07 12:40:26 +0000 UTC]

dík.. pokracuje to i takto: [link] ???

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Artmguy In reply to fogke [2012-12-07 19:02:58 +0000 UTC]

je to prilisne babske na me, ale leva je prijemna fotecky!

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fogke In reply to Artmguy [2012-12-08 11:11:49 +0000 UTC]

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gndrfck [2012-11-26 08:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Looks like they are laying on a grass)

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fogke In reply to gndrfck [2012-11-26 14:22:33 +0000 UTC]

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SadieSavage [2012-11-18 22:15:04 +0000 UTC]

it reminds me of the virgin suicides mixed with a crime scene photo. very unique, i love it!

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fogke In reply to SadieSavage [2012-11-19 15:12:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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zomby [2012-11-18 02:09:54 +0000 UTC]

It looks like it's cold and the wind is blowing strongly. If the girl in red had a more severe expression it would suggest a somewhat unsettling feel to it, or more so.

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fogke In reply to zomby [2012-11-18 09:00:33 +0000 UTC]

thx

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EdieKebby [2012-11-17 20:36:57 +0000 UTC]

cool

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fogke In reply to EdieKebby [2012-11-18 09:00:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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CoOL-S [2012-11-17 18:28:16 +0000 UTC]

love it

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fogke In reply to CoOL-S [2012-11-18 09:00:42 +0000 UTC]

i am glad

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