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PortraitClub [2009-04-16 08:03:51 +0000 UTC]

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This image really jumped out at me from the thumb. There are a lot of really great things going on here - the perspective and the composition work really well, as does the use of colour.

I especially like the broken pavement as it really adds to the overall image.

I respectfully disagree with the previous comment about the logo on the t-shirt; didn't bother me at all, in fact I wasn't even conscious off it until I read the early critique.

I also respectfully disagree about the subject's attitude - I think it makes the image more interesting. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

[Don't you just love the subjectivity of photography! e.deviantart.com/emoticons/g/g… " width="17" height="15" alt="" title="Giggle" />]

Overall a really solid image, and one to be proud of. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/c/c… " width="25" height="25" alt="" title="Clap" />

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Orzz [2009-04-16 03:55:40 +0000 UTC]

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The photograph is really good in a way... and not good in other.
I like the colors and the composition. The exposure seems to be good.
The only thing I don't like in this picture is the model's attitude (sorry)... He kinda sits there and does nothing... I would prefer having him looking down to the ground or something like that.

And because you have to put in 100 symbols (that's kinda stupid...)... why would I write so much if I can say everything in a few words...

Anyway... hope that now are enough words e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

(and I hit send before that e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> I was missing 2 symbols...)

Good luck!

L.

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fuzzywuzzy1 In reply to Orzz [2018-02-07 09:59:27 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was painted. Whether paint or photography I think it's great.

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kriccc [2009-04-15 21:17:53 +0000 UTC]

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The shot is amazing. I really like it. It looks like the model (I don't know if it's yourself) is sitting on a chair which is floating in outer space. The floor all splashed out with paint really gives the impression of galaxies and planets. Even the cracked floor on the side is a very interesting detail. In the context just mentioned it gives somehow a surreal feel.

The only thing that i would have changed in this composition is the T-shirt. I know it may look like a minor detail but in my opinion a plain t-shirt would have worked better. Printed stuff really distracts the viewer from appreciating the image holistically.

Mind you; I'm just a beginner when it comes to photography, and this is just my humble opinion.

However you have great work mate. well done and keep it up e.deviantart.com/emoticons/c/c… " width="25" height="25" alt="" title="Clap" />

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Piarvi-Recherreen In reply to kriccc [2009-04-15 22:46:24 +0000 UTC]

fair critique

you could have mentioned the superb colours contrast : i love how the green chair and the red shoes shock the eyes

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kriccc In reply to Piarvi-Recherreen [2009-04-15 22:49:49 +0000 UTC]

yes yes definitley, the colours work marvelously

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fogke In reply to kriccc [2009-04-15 21:23:25 +0000 UTC]

by the way i am not model.. only photographer here

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fogke In reply to kriccc [2009-04-15 21:23:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you mate .. nice point of view woth t-shirt.. i agree is a mistake here maybe... thanks for advice ... and i am really glad .. thank you

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kriccc In reply to fogke [2009-04-15 21:29:03 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure mate keep it up

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xequemate [2009-04-15 21:00:22 +0000 UTC]

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There are several elements that make this picture a masterpiece, in my opinion.
First of all, the combination of colors: the blue, the green and the red. The blue being the perfect background, the green making a beautiful second color and the red perfectly standing out from the rest.
Secondly, the angle is amazingly original and makes the picture look different, dynamic, something also achieved by the disposal of the elements in the perfect places, exactly where they should be.
The cracked ground introduces the surreal element. It's like everything is perfect, but, at the same time, there's a flaw. It almost seems that, at any time, the ground is going to turn into a big hole.
Considering a more personal vision, observing this picture seems to me like looking into the universe. I can see the white dots as stars in a deep blue sky and there's also a cluster of stars giving a luminous appearance, a nebula, in the left inferior corner.

Overall, I do love your vision on this picture.
Flawless technic, great originality and huge impact.

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johnberd In reply to xequemate [2009-04-15 21:54:36 +0000 UTC]

you just put all my thoughts into right words!
thank you!!!

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xequemate In reply to johnberd [2009-04-17 16:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'm very glad.
You're welcome.

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fogke In reply to xequemate [2009-04-15 21:03:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for amazing comment

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xequemate In reply to fogke [2009-04-15 21:06:55 +0000 UTC]

It's my pleasure, really. This is a brilliant piece.

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fogke In reply to xequemate [2009-04-15 21:07:59 +0000 UTC]

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Il-Signor-Satoshi [2012-12-04 20:46:15 +0000 UTC]

very cool!

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meimei808 [2012-03-20 01:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Great!

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fogke In reply to meimei808 [2012-03-20 07:56:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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OliviaMichalski [2012-02-03 14:20:29 +0000 UTC]

Hi!
I featured you in my newest Square-article!
Please check it out and give it a favourite
Have a nice weekend!

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fogke In reply to OliviaMichalski [2012-02-04 14:07:18 +0000 UTC]

thx

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Up-With-The-Birds [2011-09-15 23:22:44 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty cool. I like the shoes and the mirrors. I also agree with some of the points made in the critique. Keep on arting along.

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fogke In reply to Up-With-The-Birds [2011-09-16 23:02:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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adragonnamedsimon [2011-07-25 17:05:12 +0000 UTC]

It sort of reminds me of Doctor Who. David Tennant maybe...

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meimei808 In reply to adragonnamedsimon [2012-03-20 01:52:56 +0000 UTC]

mee too! blue box space.

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fogke In reply to adragonnamedsimon [2011-07-25 21:00:41 +0000 UTC]

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iHack217 [2011-07-10 07:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Great concept congrats mate.

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fogke In reply to iHack217 [2011-07-10 10:24:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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donzii [2011-02-18 01:11:31 +0000 UTC]

speechless

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robertochenas [2010-11-06 21:12:33 +0000 UTC]

I really like the colors of this!

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asruldwi [2010-09-24 08:28:16 +0000 UTC]

featured here [link]

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fogke In reply to asruldwi [2010-09-24 10:05:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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asruldwi [2010-09-24 08:27:59 +0000 UTC]

featured here [link]

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ultrab [2010-09-23 20:39:38 +0000 UTC]

nice perspective.

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fogke In reply to ultrab [2010-09-23 20:57:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Sabinaa [2010-07-26 20:29:05 +0000 UTC]

oh! that picture give me a great summer feeling

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fogke In reply to Sabinaa [2010-07-27 09:20:56 +0000 UTC]

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Sabinaa In reply to fogke [2010-07-27 10:20:44 +0000 UTC]

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Harley-Queen [2010-07-10 08:22:51 +0000 UTC]

where you found such a cool green chair???? great photos, bright!!

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fogke In reply to Harley-Queen [2010-07-11 11:12:44 +0000 UTC]

the chair is from tearoom, which is situated there

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Harley-Queen In reply to fogke [2010-07-11 15:05:50 +0000 UTC]

but really cool!^_^

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infernaupatia [2010-06-21 12:38:17 +0000 UTC]

love his shoes xD

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fogke In reply to infernaupatia [2010-06-26 13:33:40 +0000 UTC]

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villasappho [2010-03-26 19:46:51 +0000 UTC]

He this photo is featured here: [link] Please vote for the this articel!
Thanks for the photo.

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takingbacksunday22 [2010-03-19 21:34:01 +0000 UTC]

i read one of the critiques and i disagree ,i think that you can see a feeling in that guy's eyes ,he looks like he's looking up and telling us he;s fine where he is (okay now i'm acting like my french teacher) i love all the colors together , i usually hate red and green together but here they look so great!
i especially love the broken part
awesome picture nice job!

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fogke In reply to takingbacksunday22 [2010-03-19 22:32:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for the words

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Jeana-M-Photography [2010-01-26 16:41:19 +0000 UTC]

This photograph has been spotlighted in my journal for a month! [link] Hope you do not mind

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that70show4 [2009-12-23 16:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow!

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xero33 [2009-12-14 11:57:01 +0000 UTC]

good one

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Cylinderworm [2009-11-27 12:01:57 +0000 UTC]

This work really stands out, the colours all work so well together, especially the chair and shoes. I'm digging that angle too.

May I ask, what do you use in your hair to make it stand up like that?

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fogke In reply to Cylinderworm [2009-11-27 13:42:20 +0000 UTC]

this is not me.. but thank you

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