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FollowingtheSon — A crush from the sidelines

Published: 2008-03-20 06:16:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description So this Ronnie ( Laura's character, [link] ) and Jaden (my cousin's character). They're from a RP I'm in, and all three of us were together and we all drew the same characters together (I think Laura wrote about it in her journal) and this is what I came up with.

This is my first time really working kinda hard on a background. It looks hideous I know to most people here on DevArt, but I felt like I should share a colored piece of my work.

Hope you like it!

(c) Ronnie, Laura Lawrence
(c) Jaden, my cousin
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Comments: 6

MartinTheManichean [2008-03-24 03:51:41 +0000 UTC]

I like the foreground a lot, save for the girls right arm. This is better than any drawing I've every composed alone. That said, I feel obliged to share that the perspective is off in building in the background in the right. Over all, this piece is still enjoyable.

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FollowingtheSon In reply to MartinTheManichean [2008-03-24 06:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your constructive criticism. I appriciate it. You're the first outside of my friends who has commented on one of my peices. Haha.

Yes. I dislike her right arm a lot too. When I drew it I knew it looked wrong but changed it and it looked worse so I ended up just keeping it that way. =\ I probably should've hid it more. *shrug*
But like I said, I do know the background is hideous. I had no reference picture at all so I was going purely from what I understand of perspective (which is obviously not much at all...haha!). I knew I didn't do it right but I had no one who could tell me what I was doing wrong about it!

But anyways. Thank you very much for your comment. =]

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Felixavier [2008-03-23 03:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Wah! I missed your art so much! I love this! o.o The background looks great to me. (I'm bad at backgrounds! XD) Awesome job!! I loves it.

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FollowingtheSon In reply to Felixavier [2008-03-24 06:31:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm horrible at backgrounds 2! This is like...my 3rd one I've EVER done! lol!

Thanks so much for commenting and watching me Sally! X3 You should post more art too!

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Felixavier In reply to FollowingtheSon [2008-03-24 23:52:33 +0000 UTC]

hehehe, I never draw enough to post! o.o;; I wish I could more. I love your stuff though! You're welcome!

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Cafcow [2008-03-20 06:20:54 +0000 UTC]

You already know how much I love this one! ]X3

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