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ForbiddenImmortality β€” Elsword: Hamel 6-2

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Description First , i would to thank for advise in fixing stuff~
and also Old pic as well as missing some details....lazy lazy
Ocean Battle yeah!!!
I hate it so badly!
Make me attack soooooooooooooo slow!!
Training lineless again.....and failing as usual QuQ

Critiques for improving perspective and pose and what not.
ANYTHING!!

Characters @ Elsword's respective artist designer
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Comments: 19

Mewtwosama10299 [2016-07-30 10:58:07 +0000 UTC]

I like to attack in the water :3 Β 
Because it's so beautiful , but sometime make me annoyed much when I'm jump

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to Mewtwosama10299 [2016-08-02 05:29:03 +0000 UTC]

I hate water map, slowing speed haha

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Zu-Sushi [2013-11-28 04:21:01 +0000 UTC]

huehue nice pose

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to Zu-Sushi [2013-11-28 10:09:14 +0000 UTC]

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Ayuuria [2013-11-26 16:29:16 +0000 UTC]

All the Elesis... also the dungeon is a pain to move in.

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to Ayuuria [2013-11-28 01:49:55 +0000 UTC]

QuQ Elesis!!!!!
hahaha yeah, hate water map.....even from GrandChase!!

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Ayuuria In reply to ForbiddenImmortality [2013-11-28 18:34:51 +0000 UTC]

GC water dungeons weren't as bad if you ask me lol

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to Ayuuria [2013-11-29 01:42:00 +0000 UTC]

eue but those bottomless hole are!
QuQ

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Ayuuria In reply to ForbiddenImmortality [2013-11-29 06:12:31 +0000 UTC]

lol True

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Tasuu-chan [2013-11-26 14:33:00 +0000 UTC]

omg! i love the perspective sooo much!!

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to Tasuu-chan [2013-11-28 01:50:08 +0000 UTC]

awww thankyu~!

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AmeNoTenshi [2013-11-26 11:40:08 +0000 UTC]

looks like she's pretty deep in the water, I recommend making the loose clothes/hair flow out a bit more. If she's swinging her upper body back to whip the sword around her bangs should be going down, pointed in the direction her head just pulled from, it'll give a better feel of movement. however, the longer the hair or clothes the less movement in the water there will be, so the longer loose strands you can flow out a bit more, with all that armor she'd be sinking a bit Β at any time she stopped trying to swim up so the hair (being super light) would buoy upwards.


overall, the color and detail are amazing, great proportions, I think it just lacks the execution of movement detail that the pose is trying to suggest.

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to AmeNoTenshi [2013-11-28 01:51:02 +0000 UTC]

hmmm after reading, i do see that the clothe look....too solid to flow haha~

Thank you very much for taking up time for the descriptive critique~

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AmeNoTenshi In reply to AmeNoTenshi [2013-11-26 11:41:29 +0000 UTC]

oh and her left arm jutting out like that looks a little weird. being in the water significantly reduces speed, to get some back it would seem like she would use a two handed swing

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archefluxx [2013-11-26 11:36:23 +0000 UTC]

That's an awesome pose she's pulling. Looks good

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to archefluxx [2013-11-28 01:47:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you~!

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Hisoutensoku [2013-11-26 08:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Something is... weird about the monster teeth Β°-Β° He doesn't have jaw o3o

And yes, Hamel 6-2 is HORRIBLE D: !
just doing some Aging, Phantom Breathing and Evil stone (with PM potion of course)

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ForbiddenImmortality In reply to Hisoutensoku [2013-11-28 01:47:30 +0000 UTC]

hahaha true~
bad monster anatomy~

Everytime in henir. this boss sometime bugged out for me......they appear at the centre while for everyone else is at itr original position eue.
Make me feel useless to the party QuQ

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Hisoutensoku In reply to ForbiddenImmortality [2013-11-28 14:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Can I hope you to draw the Alterasian Type-H OwO ?If he has a Girly-form, it could be...INTERESTING *-* ohohoh

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