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FordPrefect4242 In reply to Wirrer [2014-03-31 19:15:49 +0000 UTC]

YEP! SPOT ON!!

I likes the bits with Corbaue too <3 this is going to be fun to pull all these strings <3

Ohhhhh... yeah, good point. Except Jena very clearly DOES have emotion. SHe's just also empty-headed and only thinks about good things, really. She's incapable of hatred.
HAVE YOUR FUN WITH HER, KREIA. Try and turn Jena to the Dark Side. HAH.

Everyone except Jena is intimidated by Atris. Atris is a no-nonsense Jedi Master...not even Revan is a Jedi Master at this age

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Wirrer In reply to FordPrefect4242 [2014-04-02 17:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh, poor Kreia I guess she'd be tempted to ditch Jena halfway through and try find a different Jedi to turn to the Dark Side

Atris is such a party pooper

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FordPrefect4242 In reply to HowlingFlames [2014-03-01 07:03:56 +0000 UTC]

lol I always thought Cory would be younger than Jena... but not by much! Maybe Cory would be Mical's age-ish? and Tehri, Atris, and Jena are kind of unique students, becoming masters so soon... I thought it would be interesting if my Exile officially became a Jedi master, whereas Revan has not

ohhhh probably >:-D I do like Nevarus a lot... but Cory's teacher and leader position are both taken! EL GASP! Kreia is far more interested in Revan >

yeah, how about Jena tries her best to help Cory with her...situation? and Cory told only a few people about it... of course Jena being one of them... but soon Jena has to go to Deralia (will be explained why later)...

and that's when Cory is at Nevarous's mercy... and soon after, Revan recruits her into the Revanchists. heeeeeeeee

YOU'D BETTER DO A COMIC!!

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HowlingFlames In reply to FordPrefect4242 [2014-03-01 14:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Makes sense. That means Ethelred is either their age or a bit older. He broke the mold again by being older than Revan

Yeeeeaaaaah. Corbaue is still very clever and can hide this dangerous part of her very well. Since Revan recruited her a few people go "missing", which adds juicy drama and suspense

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FordPrefect4242 In reply to HowlingFlames [2014-03-01 15:47:56 +0000 UTC]

wellllll...

as long as the people who go missing aren't in the Revanchists... I think even Revan would be offended if she lost her followers... I mean, she's going against the Jedi Council on this. She's gonna need support

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HowlingFlames In reply to FordPrefect4242 [2014-03-01 16:44:30 +0000 UTC]

She's not dumb enough to kill a Jedi. Soldiers go missing or people on planets they visit.

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FordPrefect4242 In reply to HowlingFlames [2014-03-01 17:59:51 +0000 UTC]

D:

how much of the situation would Jena know? .......because you know Jena would tell Revan.........As I hinted in this comic, Revan actually likes Jena a lot. Like in the game, Revan is very interested in the Jedi who will become the Exile... particularly in the way she seems to know people.

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HowlingFlames In reply to FordPrefect4242 [2014-03-01 20:48:38 +0000 UTC]

probably as little as possible, but if she put all her attention into it she could probably figure it out. Cory's not proud of this, and in fact knows it's wrong, but can't function without doing so. She likes Jena and doesn't want to disappoint her. During combat she's fine but between the fighting she gets bored and jittery. Hell, even Nevarous knows it's terrible but has giving up trying to stop her.

Most likely Revan would figure it out first 

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FordPrefect4242 In reply to HowlingFlames [2014-03-02 01:36:17 +0000 UTC]

hmmmmm... interesting......

I say this because Jena is the type to KNOW people. Revan is...not. Revan's harsh past and cynicisms stay with her much into adulthood. The only one who can make her smile is Alek.......

On the other hand... maybe Revan WOULD figure out something first, in the same way Lord Vetinari would...Haha, I was designing Revan to be the stand alone type who doesn't really talk with her followers... but I like the idea she might have eyes everywhere.
Revan is very clever... haha.

I wonder how the confrontation would play out? I'mma have to think about that... and have lots of fun....hahahahahahaha...

hopefully the confrontation won't be like that combo project we have going on now

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HowlingFlames In reply to FordPrefect4242 [2014-03-02 22:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Maybe, it depends on how it plays out. Corbaue is a lier, and she lies her ass off when she's afraid (which is something that I just recently realized for the character)

OH I THINK I HAVE A GREAT WRAPPING POINT FOR THIS SUBPLOT AND ANOTHER:

Ok so I was thinking where would Corby be most useful to the Revanchists? With the pilots! You need to make multiple fast choices, which she can do with two minds working in one. So he'd work around the hangers and stuff where Carth also is. Carth's looking for a murderer, right? While Corbaue didn't kill THAT person she is a killer. Now it would be like 10x more difficult to weed out Cory but hey, it'll be fun to see what happens

Actually I think she's just end up breaking down into tears out of fear. I'd say Cory's younger in this than our collab so she'd not be so fearless. Also the confrontation isn't about joining some movement but exposing a deep dark part of herself she wants to hide. It'd be very emotional

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